I thoroughly enjoyed your ficlets. The tenderness mixed with the real-life (so to speak) strains of Buffy and Dawn's relationship in the second is wonderfully captured. You can tell a mom wrote it! Good for you, wonderful to find these.
AndreaB
Review By [AndreaB] • Date [28 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Omg! Okay, the first one was just wonderful and heartbreaking and angsty and you had me right there because you know me and the angst. The second one was even more heartbreaking because you did a wonderful job of showing how much Dawn and Buffy really care for eachother and how they are unable to reach across the gap that has formed between them.
Wow.
I am dying for more now. You know this right?
*hugs*
Review By [heathenseyes] • Date [18 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Okay so you and I both know that we share the common obsession simply known as Daniel and while we only got a brief image, a shadow of who he is this still manages pull rather sharply at the heart strings. The concept itself isn't entirely original but the approach to it is and that alone deserves the shiny gold Ava star of approval but really it's the emotion you captured in such a limited amount of words that cinch this for me.
christytrekkie
polgara
Ava