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Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from trillingstar
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Please continue this story. Yes, there are a few typos. But the plot has grabbed my attention and I would love to read a Chloe/Wesley pairing. Adore Cordy/Lex. Yes! More! Thank you.
Review By [trillingstar] • Date [14 Aug 06] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Dutchy
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holy mother of god i love it so far!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE CONTINUE
Review By [Dutchy] • Date [28 Aug 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of story "Fall On Me" from Anonymous Reviewer
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This is very nice. Would be better if it continued.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [15 Oct 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Fall On Me" from Anonymous Reviewer
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well... quite interesting so far. You should... ok, just kidding. In all seriousness, the only 'you should' that I'm going to ask for is a little more description for those of us (like me) that haven't seen a lot of Smallville, and hopefully an update soonish. I like the fact that you have people interacting and assorted relationships - friendly and maybe more - that aren't so easy to categorize. It sometimes gets a litlte hard to beleive if everybody can tell who's in love/lust or interested before the couple in question, so I like the fact that there is some confussion about the relationships. - They're just friends. > Are you sure? - I'm sure.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [21 Aug 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Fall On Me" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Ah, the highschool gossip wagon gets started... Chloe is in for it now. Wesley was adorable, and a nice early AtS Wes. Their concerns about going against the Power's wishes was nice to see, especially since it shows how you're taking into account the ramifications of their actions, something that's lacking in a number of crossovers. Nicely done.

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Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [21 Aug 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Fall On Me" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Interesting story so far. On general principal though, one's prologue shouldn't be longer than one's chapters? And there's an awful lot of blank space.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [21 Aug 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Fall On Me" from Anonymous Reviewer
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I loved the coffee theme in the beginning, I also like the LEx/chloe/clark friendship theme, I too, am not a Lana fan. Please, please continue.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [15 Aug 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
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