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Review of chapter "Back To San Francisco" from MichelleWinchester
Review:
Yay!!!!! Maybe soon she'll get to see her other friends soon too!!!!! :)
As always, this was a great chapter!
My favorite part was when Cordy told him to duck as soon as he shimmers in, then when he does it, he barly dodged a energy ball! "Nice to meet you too" Slap "Behave!" lol!!!


Now on to 'A Charmed Slayer' !
Comments from author:
I'm glad you liked it! And evetually everyone will be all together; just one huge ass cast! LOL
I know, that was my favorite part too! I loved writing that; though I didn't really expect Josh to turn out to be such a smart ass. *grins* It's especially funny when you consider who I have cast as Josh. That pic will be up just as soon as I find a background that I like. I'll try and find one tonight or tomorrow and get it up tomorrow night.

I hope you enjoy 'A Charmed Slayer'!!!

And once more, Thanks for a wonderful review!!!

~ Kyra
Review By [MichelleWinchester] • Date [1 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Back To San Francisco" from TouchoftheWind
Review:
Excellent story! You know that since Josh is called Little Prince by people...maybe he and Wyatt should get together...LOL! (of course when Josh is older though) They could be soulmates...
Comments from author:
Oooo, interesting idea! I had actually vaguely planned to put Josh with Paye, but Wyatt would be an interesting option. I'll have to look at my cast list and see how things might match out. I'm not promising anything, but I do have to admit it would be interesting. LOL

~ Kyra
Review By [TouchoftheWind] • Date [29 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Back To San Francisco" from Dragonelf
Review:
Great ending.
Comments from author:
Thank You!
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [29 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Back To San Francisco" from Fighter
Review:
That was a great ending. I'm just sad to see it go. I look forward to you writing Cordy in the other story. You did a fantastic job with this story, props for getting it done so fast. Great writing, it came out perfect.
Comments from author:
Awww, you're gonna make me blush!!! Thank you so much for all of your wonderful reviews! I've added the latest chapter of 'A Charmed Slayer' so you son't have to wait to see Cordy join the cast over there.

Again, thanks for all the wonderful reviews!

~ Kyra
Review By [Fighter] • Date [29 Apr 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Back To San Francisco" from gigi
Review:
Great little side story. Must be tough for Cordy to be around Melinda, especially since she watched Buffy die. Anyway, nicely done and all that fun stuff. Now hopefully we'll see more of Charmed Slayer. I have been waiting anxiously for another update to that.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it! And you'll definitely be seeing more of 'A Charmed Slayer!' In fact, I just added the newest chapter. So, go, read, review! LOL

Thanks for the review!!!

~ Kyra
Review By [gigi] • Date [28 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Death & Rebirth" from Dragonelf
Review:
::Feeds the plot bunny::



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Shadow is the diminution alike of light and of
darkness, and stands between darkness and light.
-- Leonardo da Vinci
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Comments from author:
Thanks! I like the quote, by the way!

~ Kyra
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [26 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Death & Rebirth" from Fighter
Review:
Great chapter. I like how both stories came together nicely at the end. I can't wait to read the last chapter. But it's so sad to see it end.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it! It is kinda sad that it'll be over soon, but at the same time, I'm really excited; it'll be my first finished story that's longer than 2 chapters. The last chapter will be up on Monday, I really hope you like it. After that this story will pick up in 'A Charmed Slayer.' So, it'll almost be like it's not over, in a way.

Anywho, I'm glad you liked this chapter! Thank you so much for the review!

~ Kyra
Review By [Fighter] • Date [26 Apr 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Death & Rebirth" from MichelleWinchester
Review:
*bratty child whine* It was too short!!!!
My grown up voice though says it was good though! :) I brings us full circle back to your other story! Or should I say almost full circle since you have one more chapter to go. :) Well get to writing young lady! We need more! :)
Comments from author:
LOL! Last chapter's already written, but I'm gonna wait til Monday to post it. Mostly to give me a couple more days to work on the next chapter of 'A Charmed Slayer' so that you won't have to wait too long for it. Though, speaking of...I really should start on that...*looks slightly sheepish*

So, I guess I'm off to start on that. Thanks for the review! I'm glad you liked it.

~ Kyra
Review By [MichelleWinchester] • Date [25 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Death & Rebirth" from AllenPitt
Review:
huh....didn't see that coming. And Halliwells very often find out the details of their past lives, so eventually she's going to know she was once "Buffy", quite likely----
Comments from author:
Oh, wow, hey, I didn't even think about that! I mean, I had always planned on Melinda finding out she was Buffy, but I didn't even think about the fact that the Halliwells have a tendency to find out about their past lives!

Thanks for the review, and reminding me about that!

~ Kyra
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [25 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "An Attack And New Life" from MichelleWinchester
Review:
Who's the Daddy? Is it Doyle? I always liked Doyle and I hated it when he died!! I liked him sooo much better than the character he played on Roseanne.

This story is almost over?!? *pouts, then starts to whine* WHY?

But then again, at least then you'll get back to the other story, 'A Charmed Slayer' :)
Comments from author:
The daddy is actually just some random guy in the bar. I really didn't want to have to come up with another OC, especially since I'd just have to kill him off. Though, I might change that at some later point, but if I do it won't happen 'til some time in 'A Charmed Slayer.'

Yeah, it's almost over. But it will be continued in 'A Charmed Slayer.' This was just to fill in a few gaps for when I bring Cordy in to that story since when I started it my author's notes said that she was dead.

Next chapter will be up later today sometime.

Thanks for the review!!!

~ Kyra
Review By [MichelleWinchester] • Date [25 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Death, Destruction & Drowning Grief" from MichelleWinchester
Review:
I like it that you had Willow and Dawn helping. Just too bad Xander and Buffy didn't come.

That would totally suck if you had to watch your friends die and not be able to do anything!

Too bad Gun still had to die, but at least Fred is still alive.
Comments from author:
Yeah, I know. That was one thing I never liked about the Angel finale, I always thought that the Scoobies would help out, or that Angel and Co. would at least ask for their help.

I know, that would suck wouldn't it? Poor Cordy.

Yeah, I didn't really wanna kill Gunn, but I have way too many characters as it is, and he wasn't as important as the others. And yeah, Yay! for an alive Fred! Illyria was amusing and interesting but I still miss Fred.

Thanks for the review!

~ Kyra
Review By [MichelleWinchester] • Date [25 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Witchness Protection (Part 4)" from MichelleWinchester
Review:
Very cool! And yay! She didn't die like in the real episode! :)
Comments from author:
Thanks! And very much with the "Yay!" over her not dying! That's the only reason I'm not looking too forward to finally watching that episode, I don't wanna see her die -again-. Especially since I'll probably be thinking of her as Cordy when I watch it; even more so now because of this story. LOL

Anyway, I'm glad you liked it!

~ Kyra
Review By [MichelleWinchester] • Date [25 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "An Attack And New Life" from AllenPitt
Review:
hm... looks good all around. Kind of surprised she doesn't try to contact any of the old gang... rules or no rules..... in the series, though I understand it for budgetary reasons, it was very weird how Cordelia died and nobody from the old Sunnydale crowd showed up for a funeral etc.....
Comments from author:
I so agree! Did they even -have- a funeral for Cordy? As for contacting the gang, well, they all think she's dead so if she tried to contact them, can you imagine their reactions? The Buffy Gang would probably be all 'Oh my God! The First!!' and the Angel Gang would probably think Wolfram and Hart was behind it or something. Either way, not great reactions.

Next chapter goes up Friday, I hope you like it!

Thanks for the review!

~ Kyra
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [23 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "An Attack And New Life" from Fighter
Review:
Great chapter. But it's just so sad. We get Doyle back and then you take him away again. I'm glad that you ended up putting him in, I always liked him in the show. I can't wait to read more, Please come back soon.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you liked it! Yeah, I know it was sad but I really miss Doyle; I actually didn't plan on having him in the story but as I was writing this chapter he just kinda showed up, lol! Not that I'm complaining, I think it worked out really well. Plus, I think it gave Cordy a bit more closure where Doyle's concerned.

Next update will be Friday, and then the last one on Monday!

Thanks for the wonderful review, as always!

~ Kyra
Review By [Fighter] • Date [23 Apr 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Morning After & Pink Lines" from Fighter
Review:
Great chapter. I got to say that I didn't expect that. I wonder what's going to happen next. Come back soon.
Comments from author:
*grins* I'm glad I was able to surprise you! Next chapter will be up tomorrow (Wednesday).

Thanks for the review!

~ Kyra
Review By [Fighter] • Date [22 Apr 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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