You know, this story says it's finished, but I notice that Willow, Buffy and Faith are talking about if they can break into NORAD. Are you going to do another story on it, or are they just going to realise the loop is over and leave it alone?
Review By [DreamOfStories] • Date [11 Apr 08] • Not Rated
My only negative comment is that that as a short piece there wasn't the time to wrack-up the tension...but hey we all feel like doing shorts some times so no biggy.
Anyway nice story, thanks for sharing.
All the best, DaveT.
Review By [DaveTurner] • Date [11 Apr 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]