Nice concept; however, Dark and Xander are a little too similar in personality. There isn't the contrast of personalities as there are with Dark and Daisuke.

Now this is a cross I haven't seen before. Nice work. :)

...I only wish it weren't a oneshot. (My favorite thing in Halloween fics is a well-done exploration of the aftermath)

i liked it :} but wish you had made it longer :{

it seemed more like a summary of the story ya know :?

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Nicely done story. I know *of* anime more than I know anime, but I still like reading the crossovers. I've got a old friend who showed me some of his anime one time, and I've always considered learning Japanese so that I could listen to undubed copies since a lot of folks say the translations tend to be a bit lacking. I hope your schedule and muse will allow you to write and post more chapters on more stories sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm

Feels more like a summary then a story.

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I've had to say it to others occasionally. Where's the action?

I've reached the point where I skip entirely through the whole "Magic shop: "Excuse me young man" "Yes, I have no money can I get the costume anyway?" "Of course. Tell Giles hi." "Lady Buffy, I renounce Spandex". Which left nothing but a paragraph of a story as a result. Where are the activities that the thief performed during Halloween night?

....now you've got me addicted!!! I love Xander and you put him with my favorite anime too!!! I LOVE IT!! I need more!!!! (@.@)