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Review of chapter "4" from DarkKing
Review:
Neat. But I think it is more likely that Xander would take Buffy's surname (ie become Xander Summers) than vice versa. Remember just how well Xander got on with his father.
Comments from author:
Yeah, but you have to remember that the name Alexander Summers (i.e., Havoc) is copyrighted by Marvel Comics. ;-)
Review By [DarkKing] • Date [8 Apr 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "3" from Fayari
Review:
Buffy's basically a good person, but I wouldn't do her with a stolen dick. No matter how 'romantic' it was in her mind, necrophilia is necrophilia. And she fucked not only one, but two vampires, both of which were assholes, rapists, and pedophiles. Who were drunkards who fooled around with women back when they were alive. Just imagining the diseases they carried and passed on to Buffy shrivels me to near nonexistence. *shudder*.
Comments from author:
Okay.
Review By [Fayari] • Date [7 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "4" from SaiyaSith
Review:
Awesome! Just awesome. Absolutely loved this fic. Great, fantastic, wonderful job!!!
Comments from author:
Thanks. Glad you enjoyed the story.
Review By [SaiyaSith] • Date [7 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "4" from Annjeela
Review:
Brilliant story - unique plot and true to character
Comments from author:
Thank you.

Glad you enjoyed the story.
Review By [Annjeela] • Date [29 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "4" from FireWolfe
Review:
I just found this fic and it was great. I would love to see more.
Fire
Comments from author:
Thanks.

More is entirely up to my muse.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [3 Dec 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "4" from Hanzo
Review:
‚ô•Impressive‚ô•.
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [Hanzo] • Date [29 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "4" from Mordare
Review:
Wow, great story man. Easily one of my favorites of your short stories. Now that is how vengeance is suppose to be handled. :p
Comments from author:
Thanks for the good words.

And yes, D'Hoffryn and his minions got their butts handed to them. ;-)
Review By [Mordare] • Date [21 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "4" from XtheBlack
Review:
I continue to enjoy your works of art. Keep up the good work!

X
Comments from author:
Thanks, and I'll certainly try to do so.
Review By [XtheBlack] • Date [9 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from GreenDragon
Review:
Wow, can't believe I didn't leave a note the first time I read this. Excellent story... "go for the pain", indeed!

And it's becoming apparent to me that I glean more from a story the more times I read it... your homage to one of Larry Niven's better stories is most excellently done, with a (Newtonian) twist that he would enjoy.

Thanks again for another excellent tale!
Comments from author:
Thanks for reviewing, and glad you enjoyed the story.
Review By [GreenDragon] • Date [19 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)Speakertocustomers
Review:
You keep referring to 'Bratislava, Czechoslovakia'. This is not correct usage. Since the Velvet Divorce in 1993 Czechoslovakia has ceased to exist and Slovakia is the capital of Slovakia. Conversely, in 1898 Czechoslovakia had not yet come into existence and Bratislava was in Austria-Hungary.

Correction: where I said 'Slovakia is the capital of Slovakia' that's a typing error and I of course meant to say 'Bratislava is the capital of Slovakia'.

My daughter supports the Czech Republic football team and tends to go apoplectic when she hears TV commentators referring to 'Czechoslovakia'.
Comments from author:
While you are correct when referring to our segment of the infinite spatial-temporal continuum, I would venture to say that in that particular aspect of space-time that constitutes the Scooby-verse, political events took a somewhat different turn and the city of Bratislava did and still does exist in the nation of Czechoslovakia.

After all, I couldn't possibly have flubbed something as simple as that when writing this story, could I? ;-)

Don't know how I missed checking the history of the city when I was writing this. Guess I have to plead 'Brain fart!' ;-)
Review By [(Current Donor)Speakertocustomers] • Date [18 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "4" from (Past Donor)Effrem
Review:
Bloody Well done!
Words fail me, although they obviously don't fail you.

Thanks for an awesome read.

Effrem
Comments from author:
Thanks. It's great to hear you enjoyed the story that much.
Review By [(Past Donor)Effrem] • Date [16 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "4" from Loatroll
Review:
I thought I wouldn't when I read the summary, but I liked it. Makes sense in a way really.
And I loved the ending.
Thanks for the great read.
Comments from author:
You're quite welcome. Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [Loatroll] • Date [18 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "4" from frankocsic
Review:
nice revenge fic. i enjoyed reading it. good job and thanks for sharing!
Comments from author:
You're welcome. Glad you enjoyed it.
Review By [frankocsic] • Date [24 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "4" from Martin
Review:
That was awesome. I wasn't certain I was going to like the story, since frankly I have never really liked Angel. But for him to be completely transformed to Xander then for him to exact his vengeance was great.
Comments from author:
Thanks. Glad you liked the story.
Review By [Martin] • Date [5 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "4" from fanofkali
Review:
Great story.

Very creative use of discs.
Comments from author:
Thanks. Vengeance at its best. ;-)
Review By [fanofkali] • Date [20 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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