It is interesting... I would have never think of that pairing. It was good. And too short. It brings all king of questions like, how this two became a couple ? Will you write something more ?
Review By [Sabryna] • Date [22 Apr 08] • Not Rated
I love this, you are the first person to answer one of my challenges and you've set the bar high. It's short be incredibly well written and hot, did I mention HOT!!! lol.
I would love if you'd write more to this, it has so much potential to grow and I adore your take on Fenrir's character, it might not be as in character as the books portrayed but I've always saw him as someone you can change for tour own purposes.
Great job and please write more, you are a great writer with some especially great dialogue.
Review By [Chosenfire] • Date [20 Apr 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Very nice. I liked it over all, would like to see more in fact, my only snag was that I didn't think he would use laguage like that, being where he was from and his upbringing and all, and it took me out of the story a bit, but I really did enjoy it.
:)
Review By [heathenseyes] • Date [19 Apr 08] • Not Rated
lol, wow, so that was a pairing I never saw coming! I can't see anyway they could possibly end up together, but if they did, that sceen would be perfect =)
Review By [Keshkreature] • Date [19 Apr 08] • Not Rated