Review of chapter "XX and Epilogue" from MemoryKing
Review:
Think I preferred the first story over this one, but that may just because the Buffy source material is easier to make into a comprehensive and tight plot.
Angel's death was extremely powerful, on the other hand. Think I might have enjoyed the latter chapters more if he'd still been around, but I still have to applaud you for the decision, it has excellent shock value.
Thanks for writing!
Comments from author:
It sort of crept up on me as I was writing it, but it made so much sense I went with it and didn't cop out by bringing him back somehow.
Review By [MemoryKing] • Date [7 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "XX and Epilogue" from Nightscream
Review:
This was a wonderful read! I do hope you eventually find the time and your muse inspires you to write a 3rd part.
If not it was still and enjoyable read! Thank you for sharing your creativity! :)
Comments from author:
Thanks - I hope to at some point, but I've made two starts on it and both have been BAD so I'm leaving it to see if I get any better ideas.
Review By [Nightscream] • Date [22 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "XX and Epilogue" from SpacedCadet
Review:
This is a great story. Thanks for wiriting it!
Comments from author:
Thanks for reading!
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [17 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Many thanks - I'll try to write more sooner or later.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [10 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "XX and Epilogue" from DeepBlueJoy
Review:
This story really needs a second act. Or a third.... Come on. Cordy's gone, Connor's never gonna hook up with Dawn and Angel's dead... Damn you you evil excellent writer you. (grimace/smile)
I really hope you'll put this on the front burner when you get a chance to get back to your fiction. Please, please, pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeese....
love your writing
Blue
Review By [DeepBlueJoy] • Date [28 Aug 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "XX and Epilogue" from deathgeonous
Review:
Cool. And it NEEDS a sequil. Thanks for writing it, bye for now.
Comments from author:
I'm just too busy with other things to write fanfic at present - hopefully later this year.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [16 May 08] • Not Rated
In recent news, Heiress and Billionaire W. Rosenberg was sued by the makes of the Soft Drink Sunny Delight (commonly abbreviated SunnyD), for copyright infringement....
what an interesting chapter! Hm. I am reading this and I am usually not so inspired to review in the middle of a story. This Billie-kill-help-kill-angel-help-holtz twist is definitely not something I expected.
Ooh, that was just perfect :) And the bit with Aaron and Trina Echolls was ingenious, the first story I've read that uses that little tidbit :) I'd love to read more of this series.
Review By [Ansku] • Date [20 Nov 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]