This is a very intriguing concept, not to mention well-written. Here's hoping you'll eventually come back to it, but if not, good luck with your other stories.
Review By [bookworm] • Date [17 May 11] • Not Rated
This is a very, very intriguing story. I particularly like the way you handle Jendayi and Roho's relationships, both between themselves and with the tribes they interact with.
Review By [mendenbar] • Date [16 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I'm starting to think J. will end up in the watcher records, as 'somebody to watch out for' ie a demon who is always trying to interfere with watchers & slayers....
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [16 May 08] • Not Rated
Interesting! Haven't seen this plot idea before. Hm... will the Council eventually have any records of her? Not of her part in the origin of the slayer, but of some 'strange woman' who associates with the slayer and is very anti-council? Does Roho survive to the present?
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [23 Apr 08] • Not Rated