Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Mari
The squabble about hotels was a nice touch. Duncan can afford better, and wouldn't see a reason not to, and Dean would be so use to getting by on the minimum, it wouldn't really occur to him to go to a nicer place on his own. In addition, the bit with Chloe was good; once in a while someone would get offended by Dean's . . . Deanness.
Comments from author:
Glad you enjoyed the banter and interaction between these characters. Thank you so much for stopping by and sharing your thoughts!
Review By [Mari
] • Date [13 Jun 08] • Not Rated