Oh, wow. How in the hell did I miss this one? You do such a wonderful job capturing Derek's voice that it makes me afraid to even try. *is jealous* Damn, sweetie, just damn.
You know I loved it. And I think if someone wants a story that portrays John and Cameron in a different kind of relationsship, then they should write it, not rag on yours.
Review By [dharkcharlotte] • Date [8 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Why does it always have to be bad? Why can't people write nice Cameron/John fanfiction? Especially the part where Cameron has strong emotions. You should write that kind of story, because Cameron is a life form even if she isn't human. Maybe she might be an anomaly, but that doesn't make her wrong. Anyway loved the story you should write more of these.
Review By [Terapsina] • Date [8 Sep 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
I am glad for your Derek obession, it has translated into a very good little ficlet. Great characterization all around and I especially love the scene between Derek and Cameron.
Review By [Chosenfire] • Date [23 Apr 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Ooh, nice. I read the other one and thought that it was a funny little place to leave off, but I like the continuation of this. Mainly because I was really curious as to what they were looking at after reading the first one. I really like this. I hope you decide to do more.
Comments from author:
Thanks! I did it for DHFreak! :-) I like writing in this fandom... As you can see by my Sense of Inevitability! LOL
Review By [winterd] • Date [22 Apr 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Ava
dharkcharlotte