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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Allyssiandra
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Interesting... I would be interested in seeing a sequel. Love to see what those two (Xander and Faith) would do to section and if section would survive Willow coming to look for Xander.
Review By [Allyssiandra] • Date [26 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CPTSkip
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OMG! What a fantastic idea for a cross. I can't wait for Faith and Xander to bring Section to its knees. Lol! I love it when outsiders look at the Scoobies and see them in preconceived ways that have very little to do with the Hellmouthian 'reality'. Lol!
Comments from author:
that was kind of the point of this. I was watching first season of LFK, and it just stuck me the way that place was writen out. it made no mistakes, and just rolled over anyone in their way.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [24 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from theunixer
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Good one. Please continue it.

If you do, please don't make it anything like a totally hopeless 'no one ever leaves Section alive' deal. They get out permanently and do so VERY fast.

Keep in mind that if Xander is in real trouble (it would have to be after regaining consciousness, Section 1 usually abducts their soon-to-be recruits via knockout drugs), Willow will know about it instantly. They do have that telepathy spell link (short range for word exchange, much, much greater for extreme emotions?) Willow created. She WOULD go totally ballistic and mount a rescue (yes, with Buffy). This would not involve Willow succumming to Dark Magic and trying to destroy the world (Section 1 on the other hand..., with Xander to talk her out of its' total destruction), Xander is still alive after all.

The scene I just envisioned (if you want to go with it) involves both Faith and Xander breaking them out of their cell(s) and together going on a massive rampage (fueled by a rage at the worse-than-Initiative policies of Section) through Section and its' security staff extremely easily. And yes, Faith killing if needed, Xander doing so as well (his Soldier Guy memories would give him excellent killing skills, including marksmanship and he finds that the hyena possession [with glowing green eyes at this extreme time?] gave him some greater than normal strength and endurance, he just didn't notice it before since he was always up against vampires and demons who are much stronger). A great scene would be Operations, Madeline, Nikita, and Michael watching in the Perch and Operations exclaiming, "What the hell ARE those two!?". They would most likely be cornered, then in teleports a black-eyed Willow along with Buffy to the rescue. And Ohhh boy, what THEY do to Section 1... Section 1 NEVER bothers the Scoobies again, EVER.

Section 1 does find out about the 'Night Life' at this point (having been [kept by Oversight?] totally ignorant before - they learn about the Initiative and take the its' lessons to heart) and figure that terrorists are Section1's purview and the Scoobies have their own equally or even more important war.

I really hope you continue this story. Would you please indicate whether you will or not?
Comments from author:
those are some good ideals. I still am working on other stories at this time, but if you want to write that out go ahead.


my big thing about section. locking up a slayer over night. and the Hungry horny's hit. Faith would be out of her skin the next and I would feel sorry for the first male to walk into the room...

I would kind of feel sorry for him, and kind of wish it was me....
Review By [theunixer] • Date [23 Apr 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bill
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SWEET! Section One is so in trouble.
Review By [Bill] • Date [23 Apr 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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