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Review of chapter "Changes: For the Better or not?" from chacra
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why the heck didn't you already update this amazing story?????!!!!!!!!!

please please do it!!!!!!!!
Review By [chacra] • Date [24 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Changes: For the Better or not?" from ebony
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I have reread this story several times ang I am still holding out hope that it will be finished some day.
Review By [ebony] • Date [29 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Changes: For the Better or not?" from Starfall
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you have so many great stories that I would love to see more of. Are you planning to continue these? here or elsewhere? I must have at least half of your stories under tracking can't wait til you continue them. =)
Review By [Starfall] • Date [11 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Changes: For the Better or not?" from CleoVamp
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I love this story. I think it's one of your best written that I've read to date. There's still a lot of your stuff I haven't read yet. I would truly love to see this finished.
Review By [CleoVamp] • Date [22 Dec 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Changes: For the Better or not?" from Hanzo
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I look forward to reading what happens next in your story.
Review By [Hanzo] • Date [8 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Changes: For the Better or not?" from greysh
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Nice fic! I like the team you assembled :) it's a good group.
I hope that you will continue with this fic. I want to know how willow and buffy deal with their mistakes.
Review By [greysh] • Date [12 Sep 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Changes: For the Better or not?" from animefangirl
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loved it ... plz update soon :}
Review By [animefangirl] • Date [28 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Changes: For the Better or not?" from elfwitch
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This is a great fic so far. Please update I would love to read more. I like how the interactions between the characters are shaping up. PLEASE ADD MORE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Review By [elfwitch] • Date [25 May 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Changes: For the Better or not?" from twlight
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I have to say that this is a wonderful story so far, I do have to ask if you are going to update this soon as it has been over two years since the last update. I do however have to say that I am eager for the next update.
Review By [twlight] • Date [19 May 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Scoobies 101" from ptbptb
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This is a good start overall, but I think there are a few points that don't work that well.

* Big supernatural reveal

Either everybody at the meeting knew about demons already or they are all masters of the understated reactions. I think you should make it clear that they know about the supernatural world.

* Mind-rape is a word now?

Although the challenge used the phrase 'mind rape' presumably it actually refers to the abuse of memory altering magic. I think 'mind rape' (on its own) is both unclear in meaning and overly emotive for an official briefing of very important officials.

* Stereotypical Xander fic is stereotypical

I like Xander, I really do. But I don't have a car bumper with WWXD (What Would Xander Do) and I realise that he is a fallible human just like the rest of us. Finn's description of Joyce makes it seem that her only purpose is to defend Xander from her evil daughter.
Review By [ptbptb] • Date [12 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Changes: For the Better or not?" from animefangirl
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i really love this plz update soon :}
Review By [animefangirl] • Date [13 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Changes: For the Better or not?" from fayannr
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I love this story. I like how others can see that Joyce, Tara and Xander are the foundations that hold the group up. Please update soon!
Review By [fayannr] • Date [8 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Changes: For the Better or not?" from jgoodman
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love this story, please update
Review By [jgoodman] • Date [23 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Changes: For the Better or not?" from AXanFan
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I really like the idea of the Scoobies finding a way to mend the rifts in their friendships and getting the help they all need to deal with all the trauma they each have experienced.

I'm sorry, but I just can not get into the character, Ranma -- he seems like a sympathetic person, but his changing with different temperatures of water is just too strange -- every time it rained he would be changing -- every shower -- also having to pour water over yourself if you want to change -- going around in wet clothes -- just too weird.

I really like the idea of the protectors helping all the others heal their "wounds", but also learn where they all could do better and improve.

Hope you plan to write more. Should be interesting to see where this goes.
Review By [AXanFan] • Date [3 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Changes: For the Better or not?" from Ansku
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Intriguing :)
Review By [Ansku] • Date [29 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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