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ShieldageReview:
Heh, very cool. Glad to see River found a home possibly as strange as her insides ;)
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Shieldage] • Date [26 Apr 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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ShyBobReview:
Well plotted and deftly executed...but I wouldn't let Willy and River work on projects together. I can just see the 'amazing exploding boomerang of chocolate death...eliminates your enemies, then provides you with a much-needed chocolate boost!' ;)
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ShyBob] • Date [26 Apr 08] • Not Rated
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NoclafReview:
poor Simon... I dont think that he's going to like the Ommpa Loompas....
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Noclaf] • Date [26 Apr 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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faepixeeReview:
loved this. could actually hear wonka's voice as i was reading. thanks!
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faepixee] • Date [26 Apr 08] • Not Rated
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dharkcharlotteReview:
excellent!
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dharkcharlotte] • Date [25 Apr 08] • Not Rated
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AngusHReview:
Unexpected as a crossover but really nicely done.
I suppose River will fit in better than Simon will :-)
Great story.
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AngusH] • Date [25 Apr 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
