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Review of chapter "Saying Goodbye" from Phoenyxx
Review:
WOW! i just found this one, it's all kinds of interesting. I'm looking forward to more if your muse agrees with you.
Comments from author:
Thanks! I'm glad you like it! I definitely plan to continue it, I've just had major writers block with it for a while. :(
Review By [Phoenyxx] • Date [1 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Saying Goodbye" from Oddshot
Review:
Just finished Chapter 7 , I look forward to many more Chapters of this story as this author also has 2 other story's that I am tracking at this time , so I will forgive some delays
Comments from author:
Thanks! Glad you liked it! And I do apologize for the delays, I have so many different WIPs that it sometimes takes me a while to get back to one.

~ Kyra
Review By [Oddshot] • Date [18 Aug 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Saying Goodbye" from Dragonelf
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Yay, new chapter.

::Gives the plot bunny some Waldorf Salad::

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Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [27 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Saying Goodbye" from AllenPitt
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Max & company will have a tough time with her--sort of a transgenic but sort of not, knows things she shouldn't know, etc. Not to mention Faith: not a transgenic but not a human either.
Comments from author:
Yeah, things should definitely get interesting.....
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [23 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Saying Goodbye" from draconis
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Looking forward to adventures in Seattle. Should be fun seeing how 'real' transgenics...and Logan...react. I assume Faith's Slayer immunity will help her deal with the toxins in Terminal City. Perhaps Willow also could check to see if a Seattle witch might be available to help the transgenics.

Thanks for the update!
Comments from author:
I'm glad you're looking forward to it! I still need to figure out what all I want to happen, but hopefully I'll be able to come up with something interesting and fun.

Thanks for the review!

~ Kyra
Review By [draconis] • Date [19 Jul 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Saying Goodbye" from Arekanderu
Review:
Great story :)
Comments from author:
Thanks! :-)
Review By [Arekanderu] • Date [19 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Saying Goodbye" from Acherlyn
Review:
I'm loving this....Especially the Cordy/Faith friendship.....I will love Cordy/Alec....Faith/Krit....
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [Acherlyn] • Date [18 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Saying Goodbye" from Terapsina
Review:
I love this story, especially your Faith and Cordy friendship I always thought that they would have been able to help each other if they were closer.
And now we will look how it goes in Seattle. I cant wait for a confrontation between these two and Max and her friends.
So exactly what pairing are you planning for?
Anyway very nice work!
Comments from author:
Thanks! I totally agree about Faith and Cordy, I think they could have been great friends if given the chance. Pairings will be Crody/Alec and Faith/Krit. Krit may have only been in one ep, but I loved him, so I decided to bring him back. Now I just need to figure out how they end up together. I had it all figured out then lost my notes when my computer crashed, so now I have to rework everything. :-(

I'm glad you liked the new chapter, thanks for the review!

~ Kyra
Review By [Terapsina] • Date [18 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Saying Goodbye" from CPTSkip
Review:
I was very glad to see an update to your story. I actually wish you had written more as I don't think I've read many, or any, stories where Faith and Cordy are best friends. I hope you continue your story and I like you Cordy a lot and would love to read about more if Cordy's and Faith's adventures. Plus, I would really like to see the two of them kick some demonic butts. Maybe they could stop off in San Francisco and help out three sisterly witches? Lol!
Comments from author:
LOL! I don't see them stopping off in San Francisco, as amusing as that would be. I'm glad you like my Cordy, she's so much fun to write. I don't think I've seen many stories where her and Faith are friends, either. I'm sorry this wasn't longer, but I didn't want it feeling forced. Once I get the outline reworked, hopefully it won't take me as long to get updates for this written.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [17 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Saying Goodbye" from cwolf
Review:
Which siege. The one from the show, or the one from Season 3 that an author was given permission to write by the owners of the show after it got cancelled. When they moved to an abandoned facility, and the police tried to figure out just what to do with them.
Comments from author:
Gonna have to say the one from the show since I've never read any of the books. My Dark Angel knowledge ends with the show. Though, I seriously think they should have at least done a TV movie to tie up the loose ends.
Review By [cwolf] • Date [17 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Saying Goodbye" from (Current Donor)Blackswordzero
Review:
Good chapter.
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [(Current Donor)Blackswordzero] • Date [17 Jul 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Saying Goodbye" from djhardim
Review:
Looks good. I must confess I'm not that familar with the show.

I am a little surprised that Cordy has to take Tryptophan in pill form. I would think she would get enough from her diet.

From wikipedia - "Tryptophan is a routine constituent of most protein-based foods or dietary proteins. It is particularly plentiful in chocolate, oats, durians, mangoes, dried dates, milk, yogurt, cottage cheese, red meat, eggs, fish, poultry, sesame, chickpeas, sunflower seeds, pumpkin seeds, spirulina, and peanuts. It is found in turkey at a level typical of poultry in general."
Comments from author:
Hunh. I didn't know that about Tryptophan....I was just going by the fact that Max (the main character on Dark Angel) takes her Tryptophan in pill form, and so do some of the other Transgenics on the show. Maybe it's just that the Transgenics need so much of it....? I'm really not sure. But they take it in pill form on the show, so that's why Cordy does.

I'm glad you like it so far though. Thanks for the review!

~ Kyra
Review By [djhardim] • Date [17 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Saying Goodbye" from TouchoftheWind
Review:
Very good...Oz should totally come into this!
Comments from author:
Thanks! And sorry, but I don't think Oz will be making any appearances. I'm not ruling it out though, especially since I have no idea where this is going anymore, lol. If Cordy and Faith come back to Sunnyhell with their guys, I'll try and get Oz in at least once.
Review By [TouchoftheWind] • Date [17 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Seizing" from (Current Donor)Blackswordzero
Review:
I can't wait to read the next chapter,please update
Comments from author:
Next chapter should be up tomorrow. :-)
Review By [(Current Donor)Blackswordzero] • Date [16 Jul 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Seizing" from Acherlyn
Review:
This is one of my favorite stories you are writing. I am patiently waiting for the next update.
Comments from author:
:-) Thanks, I'm glad you like it. I'm working on the next chapter now so hopefully it'll be up soon. Though, it will probably be a bit shorter than the last couple of chapters.
Review By [Acherlyn] • Date [30 Jun 09] • Not Rated
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