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Review of chapter "Chapter 19" from serenityselena
Review:
wonderful story ^_^
Comments from author:
I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [9 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 18" from RebeccaAshling
Review:
I've just reread this story and was pleased to see a new chapter. Hope RL and your muse will let you update fairly soon. Catherine and Sara: they make quite the cute couple, don't they? Glad that Mr Gordo is seeing some lurve action. Unless, of course, Miss Piggybottom comes out as lesbian ;) I thought that Grissom's team took the revelation that Buffy's the Slayer quite calmly. I'm guessing they've had run-ins with the supernatural. Thanks for the story!
Comments from author:
Thank you for the lengthy review, I'm glad that you have liked it so far, and I have the last chapter with my beta now, so stay tuned.
Review By [RebeccaAshling] • Date [2 Aug 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 18" from immortalsilence
Review:
love the fic more chapters pretty please
Comments from author:
Happy that you enjoyed the update. I'll see if I can kick the muse into gear for more.
Review By [immortalsilence] • Date [22 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 18" from TwoBlackDragons
Review:
BTW thank you very much for the update, I'm pretty enthused about this story.

As for RL, yeah sometimes it so very much sucks.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review, I'm glad you liked it. I'll see if I can get the muse focused enough to finish this.
Review By [TwoBlackDragons] • Date [22 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 14" from TwoBlackDragons
Review:
Review of chapter "Chapter 14" from TwoBlackDragons

Review:

You [] differentiate between the moms by saying Mom-C and Mom-J.

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Comments from author:
I have no idea how to answer this.
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That's because where the brackets are there should be a might, otherwise I committed a typo. :(


So what it should say is,

You might differentiate between the moms by saying Mom-C (Catherine) and Mom-J (Joyce).

For when Buffy or Dawn are talking about both moms.


As for the other stuff you're right, they do use fictitious names for things. They also get stuff wrong. For instance one of the early shows said judges were appointed and in NV judges are elected.
Comments from author:
I didn't mention Joyce much after the early chapters, so it wouldn't make much of a difference, but if I would've thought about when I was first writing it, I probably would have made a distinction between the two moms.
Review By [TwoBlackDragons] • Date [22 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 18" from Mwhahahaha
Review:
Yay! It's an update...I defiantly liked this and can't wait to read more!
Comments from author:
I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the review.
Review By [Mwhahahaha] • Date [22 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 16" from TwoBlackDragons
Review:
You keep referring to it as PD when they would refer to it as Metro, short for Metropolitan Police Dept.

Metro are the county cops. Several decades ago the Sheriffs Dept. and the LVPD were combined to form Metro PD meaning all of Clark County that isn't part of another jurisdiction, like North LV or Henderson, is their territory.

Clark County, NV is bigger than some eastern states.
Comments from author:
Again if you watch ANY CSI, they often say PD.
Review By [TwoBlackDragons] • Date [21 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 14" from TwoBlackDragons
Review:
Wil and I have had a few more skating dates, and she is picking it up faster than I thought she would. Plus, she has been checking on courses at Western LVU.


That's UNLV. I've lived in the Vegas Valley since the late '50's so trust me when I say it's UNLV.
Comments from author:
You may live in the Vegas Valley, but if you've watched ANY CSI, you would know that Western LVU is a college that they reference often.
Review By [TwoBlackDragons] • Date [21 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 14" from TwoBlackDragons
Review:
You differentiate between the moms by saying Mom-C and Mom-J.
Comments from author:
I have no idea how to answer this.
Review By [TwoBlackDragons] • Date [21 Jul 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 17" from TwoBlackDragons
Review:
Evil author\muse = one who doesn't finish stories they start.
And this is a good story, so please stop being an evil author\muse.
Comments from author:
Well, RL tends to get in the way of writing. If that makes me evil, then so be it.
Review By [TwoBlackDragons] • Date [21 Jul 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 17" from Melaniemarie
Review:
Really liking the story. I hope you post more chapters soon...
I would like to see if Buffy stays in Vegas with the fam.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review.I'm glad you are enjoying the story. I'll see what the muse can do for you.
Review By [Melaniemarie] • Date [4 May 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 17" from immortalsilence
Review:
love this fic more chapters needed pretty please
Comments from author:
Glad you are liking the story. The muse and RL have been giving me fits of late, but I'll try and see what I can do.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [immortalsilence] • Date [19 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 17" from LadyDeath
Review:
I was really looking forward to this story, but all the people/couples whose characters are not gay being portrayed as such was just too much...if it was only one or two people it wouldn't have bothered me, but changing so many people was off-putting and unrealistic, I just couldn't enjoy the story because of it, sorry.
Review By [LadyDeath] • Date [24 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 17" from spring
Review:
Silly Giles, overreacting. I love this so far and I am very eager for the next chapter.
Comments from author:
That's Giles. As much time as he has spent in America, his Britishness still comes out now and then.

Thanks for the review. I'm glad you're liking the story.
Review By [spring] • Date [17 Jun 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from SpacedCadet
Review:
I like the story, but I am curious where you got "Marie" as Willow's middle name.

It's not impossible, but "Marie" seems like an unlikely name for a girl with very religious Jewish parents to have.
Comments from author:
I didn't really give much thought to Willow's middle name. Thanks for the review.
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [7 Mar 09] • Not Rated
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