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Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from SpacedCadet
Review:
Just discovered this and I'm REALLY REALLY sorry you never did any more!
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [8 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from ShyBob
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Dude, you are 2 for 2 on best "line of the week." Laughed my a$$ off at Tony's lines. Very in character dialogue overall.
Review By [ShyBob] • Date [5 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from AtotheM
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Really great start, you captured the characters' voices fantastically. I hope you come back to this story someday :)
Review By [AtotheM] • Date [12 Sep 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Letomo
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I'm sorry this wasn't continued, as it is hilarious! Would love to see more. You do seem to have Tony's 'voice' down very well.
Review By [Letomo] • Date [29 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Scathach
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This was great! Are you going to keep writing?
Review By [Scathach] • Date [23 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from TwoBlackDragons
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Evil author\muse = one who doesn't finish stories they start.
And this is funny beyond believe, so please stop being one of the evilest of authors.
Review By [TwoBlackDragons] • Date [3 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TwoBlackDragons
Review:
Evil author\muse = one who doesn't finish stories they start.
And this is a terrific story, so please stop being one of the evilest of authors.
Review By [TwoBlackDragons] • Date [3 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from TristramShandy
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Well, if Tony's gonna spend a year and a half staring at a pair of legs, then Dawn's are a pretty good pair for it.
Review By [TristramShandy] • Date [13 Aug 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from (Current Donor)MarcusRowland
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I must have previously missed this - I'd really love to see more.
Review By [(Current Donor)MarcusRowland] • Date [5 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Christy
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really, really loving the story so far....I really think you "hear" Tony's voice, if nothing else...a great story, great characterization...can't wait to read more...keep up the fabulous work.
Review By [Christy] • Date [2 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from TwoBlackDragons
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More soon please?
Review By [TwoBlackDragons] • Date [8 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Queensarrow
Review:
I hope you haven't given up on this. I would like to see
more.
Review By [Queensarrow] • Date [23 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from banner
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That was fun - and beautifully in character, for everyone. I especially enjoyed the way Tony sat down after the combat and thought about the Slayers. He didn't fly into a rage, he didn't start screaming about the girls' ages. Moreover, he wasn't condescending or patronizing to Buffy or any of the girls.

This is a good beginning. I'd like to see more of this story.
Review By [banner] • Date [2 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Elleria
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More soon please?
Review By [Elleria] • Date [23 Jun 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from JediKnight
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Very good job on the new chapter, I hope you'll post a new update soon.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [7 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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