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Review of chapter "The Bad News" from Wise
Review:
Overused plot device is overused.
Seriously. Whistler?
Comments from author:
Alright, I accept constructive criticsm, but this isn't it. Thanks for your comment, but who else do you suggest I use to be the bearer of bad news from the Powers. He is, afterall, their messenger. Seriously.
Review By [Wise] • Date [25 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Unexpected Visitor" from Immortal
Review:
Can't wait for the next part. You've got their characters nailed!
Review By [Immortal] • Date [15 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Unexpected Visitor" from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
Review:
You really know your Torchwood characters! Loving the story... keep it coming.

Wispr
Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [12 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Beginning" from Shezzi
Review:
Very nice beginning! please update soon, this is really really good! love xx Shezzi
Review By [Shezzi] • Date [11 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Beginning" from (Recent Donor)Kiwikatipo
Review:
It was good right up to the very last paragraph, I don't see Jack sniveling merely because Gwen fainted. You should definitely continue the story however it has potential.
Comments from author:
Thanks for your review. The second one is in the works. Now, just to clear things up Gwen didn't faint, she seized. Which is a very scary experience. I used to have a dog that was known to have fits of seizures it seemed every other day and I still remember how scary it was to hold her so she wouldn't hurt herself. Anyway, thanks again for the review. I hope you continue reading it. :)
Review By [(Recent Donor)Kiwikatipo] • Date [11 May 08] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Beginning" from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
Review:
What an fascinating start... got me hooked!

Wispr
Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [11 May 08] • Not Rated
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