It became clear that doting fathers had an advantage, because they knew all the spells that were intended to keep young children amused and entertained. These spells never took much energy, but worked admirably as distractions. For the first time ever, Severus cursed his dislike of children. ~ Superb. LOL.
Review By [leelaa] • Date [22 Jan 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
One of the problems I have with JKR's work is the restricted point of view. Your variety was wonderfully refreshing.
Comments from author:
It's true of most children's books: the characters are so very flat. I do like kid's books but sometimes they need a bit of interpretation to make the characters more human.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [12 Aug 09] • Not Rated
That was interesting and different and terrifying in its implications. I'll be thinking about this one for a long time.
Comments from author:
Excellent! I like making people think: bad guys still have some good in them, and good guys do make compromises. If you come to any conclusions, let me know.
A different kind of HP story that does a GREAT job of showing the human side of Voldemort and the Death Eaters - I like this one. It's a refreshing change of perspective.
Looking forward to more from you.
T
Comments from author:
Thanks! I like showing that "bad guys" are still people. No matter how horrific they are in some ways, they are still capable of being good in others.
Review By [TraceyC] • Date [14 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
LMAO at the epilogue!!! So totally Scooby in its practice!!! you can tell Willow grew up with Xander. ;-)
And I also liked how you showed the Death Eaters aren't all completely one-dimensional. Morality is a wide spectrum of grey, with very few things simply black or white, and you portrayed this very well.
Good work.
Comments from author:
Thanks! I like the Harry Potter stories, I like children's books in general, but they do tend to make the bad guys just plain evil and humans don't really come in simple variations like that. Maybe the need to develop those extra dimensions is what makes fanfic so addictive. Anyway, thanks for the review.
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [13 May 08] • Not Rated
Welcome to TTH. I have always liked this story. I have you tracked as a favorite author on FFN. Thanks a bunch for all your stories.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the welcome. FFN is still my main archive but I really like TTH (and they allow Anita Blake stories) so I figured I would post some here, too.
Review By [spurious] • Date [13 May 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]