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Review of chapter "Omnipresence is a Bitch" from kaleecat
Review:
Creepy and clever. The SGC are now on a playing field way beyond their military and scientific comprehension. Only Daniel is liable to have the imagination & flexibility to realize how screwed they are.
Comments from author:
Thank you. Daniel will be the most accepting, but I think Vala has a pretty good grasp of how screwed they are since she's foremost a survivor. Thank you for reviewing.
Review By [kaleecat] • Date [13 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Omnipresence is a Bitch" from (Recent Donor)jedibuttercup
Review:
... So she's saying that by wiping out the Ori, Daniel inadvertently demolished the balance keeping the FE-vs-Ascended treaty in check? The poor guy just can't win for trying, can he?
Comments from author:
Oopsy-doodle.

I think I'm being as mean to Daniel in this series as I am to Buffy regularly. Those poor characters. I should really write them in some fluff once and awhile to repay them for all the crap I put them through. :)
Review By [(Recent Donor)jedibuttercup] • Date [12 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Omnipresence is a Bitch" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Okay, that truly does suck for our heroes in the Stargate universe! And has the Doci become the new Caleb? Not good all around!
Comments from author:
One religious zealot replaced by another. I think it parallels nicely. :) Thank you for reviewing.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [12 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Omnipresence is a Bitch" from (Current Donor)mmooch
Review:
Yikes. Wonder how long it will be before everyone is pining for the good ol' days of fighting the Ori.
Comments from author:
I'd also be a little worried about the fact that eating Adria gave the First Evil the ability to actually toss Daniel into a wall. *whistles* Our heroes are definitely not in their comfort zone anymore.
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [12 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Omnipresence is a Bitch" from spacey
Review:
oh, YUM!
Comments from author:
I wonder if that's what the First Evil thought after she devoured Adria? :)
Review By [spacey] • Date [12 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Waiting Dark" from (Current Donor)Sulien
Review:
Oooh, wicked! Nope, Adria would never have stood a chance against the First. I enjoyed this, thanks for sharing it. :-)
Comments from author:
You're very welcome! Adria is a lot of things but none of them add up to something that could take on the First. Hell, Buffy would have gotten her arse handed to her if she'd been incorporeal. ;)

Glad you liked it and thank you for taking the time to review!
Review By [(Current Donor)Sulien] • Date [24 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Waiting Dark" from (Past Donor)Mari
Review:
Personally, I thought the First was underused, so it's nice to see a First that's actually seriously creepy and evil--more plans than just the big monsterfest. You almost feel sorry for Adria.
Comments from author:
I feel sorry for the SGC who now have to contend with an Ori army controlled by the First. Though Adria is a close second. ;)

Thank you for taking the time to review!
Review By [(Past Donor)Mari] • Date [15 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Waiting Dark" from Kennie
Review:
Oooh! Very good! I liked it. A convincing stand-off between the two entities there. I loved the ending too! Well done. :)
Comments from author:
Thank you! I think this is a good recipe add two manipulative beings, stir and wait for the fireworks. Though now I'm wondering how many other Stargate villains can the First destroy or at the very least annoy? *ponders*
Review By [Kennie] • Date [15 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Waiting Dark" from MistofRainbows
Review:
The first useful thing the First ever did.
:)
Comments from author:
It's about damn time the First got off her arse and started paying attention to something other than the Slayer-line. ;)
Review By [MistofRainbows] • Date [15 May 08] • Not Rated
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