Review of chapter "Any Man of Mine" from Deanie
Very cute ficlet, though there were a few little typos. The Cordy/Booth interaction was fun and you've got both of them down very well.
Review By [Deanie
] • Date [5 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Any Man of Mine" from tallyvision
First off, I really like the AU you developed for this story. It just seems like a much better fate for Cordy than a random anti-climactic death.
The scene between Booth and Cordy in the car was great. It reminded me a lot of the banter between Angel and Cordy, but with Booth's personality thrown in. (Booth and Angel are basically the same character with varying levels of angst some times.) The scowling comment was great.
My favorite part of the fic was by far Cordelia explaining the word "Fugly." I lol'd a little bit, and I'm glad my roommate wasn't here to shoot me weird looks for that.
The only thing I didn't really like was how sudden the ending was. You were building up the Cordelia/Booth romance, and then the last line seemed to come too soon, and it didn't feel like it had a good amount of closure.
However, I did thoroughly enjoy the story as a whole.
Review By [tallyvision
] • Date [26 Aug 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Any Man of Mine" from kayariley
Not sure he can handle Queen C...
Also, I t ink ypu meant 'pedal to the metal' - not 'metal to the pedal.'
Review By [kayariley
] • Date [6 Jul 08] • Not Rated