Review of chapter "Don't Be Stupid (You Know I Love You)" from BlameyFomorrii
That was pretty sweet. Silly git Ron.
Review By [BlameyFomorrii
] • Date [20 Jun 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Don't Be Stupid (You Know I Love You)" from mandac
Nicely done. Great use of humor and characterization. I always love seeing Ron written well. :D
Just a friendly bit of critic, but I did find a few mistakes in your first sentence:
*quotation marks here to begin the quote*FOR THE UMPTEENTH TIME, RONALD BILIUS WEASLEY, nothing happened between myself and Draco Malfoy, alright?" Dawn Summers was this*space here*close to ripping the hairs off her very own head when her boyfriend of nearly six months cornered her at Giles*needs an apostrephe to show posession* cozy English home just outside of London.
Other than that, it looked great and it highly amused.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the friendly critique. And I'm glad you enjoyed reading the fic as well as enjoyed the humour. I was kinda weary about writing this pair as I am not sure if I have a good handle of both Dawn and Ron, but Ron's such a lovable character that i can't help but just make him...well, lovable! -LoL-
Review By [mandac
] • Date [20 May 08] • Not Rated