Still an awesome story that I love to re-read from time to time. I do wonder when or if you plan to continue the story; it's been awhile since the last update. I hope not, I really like this story and you kind of left it on a cliffhanger. Thanks for the story; Happy Writing!
Review By [sekmarc] • Date [3 Dec 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
I have read your story and enjoyed it a great deal, although you are in dire need of an editor/beta. I truly hope that you have not abandoned this story, though I see that it has not been updated for about a year, and the HP story hasn't been updated for 3 years.
I hope your RL improves and you can begin writing again soon.
This is one of my favorite Marvel BtVS crossovers, also read stelar wonderer, which is really good to. Hope you update soon, cant wait to see what you come up with next.
Review By [tgo] • Date [13 Apr 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
HELLO LOL I SAW THAT YOU ARE INCOME OF THE DEAD, SO I POST THIS REVIEW I hope you have an armor set for faith but also two iron witch (for use janna and anna) but you have an armor Hulkbuster I must say that I hope that will continue to evolve Technites while character but also shaped appearance I hope that the techniques are like internet, video games, but the emissions ausi science fiction and they do make their own technologies and research ca I say just because I would really love Technites techhnologies create universes like mas effect, halo, gundam, crysis, Section 8 and other ... I also hope that some Technites follow some of the friends xander and helps to become more mature and close to him but also think outside the box commee they say and using technology in science fiction otherwise I must say that among the iron man there are some that can give xander technologies other than iron tech
example is an iron emperor iron man who killed fatalis and its technology has conquered the land and founded the Terran Empire
there has ultimate iron man developed neural tissue normally found only in the brain all throughout his body, causing his entire body to act as one massive brain, giving him tremendous mental capacity. However, one of the side effects of the accident from the minute he was born was a extreme dermal sensitivity, making even the sensation of air on his skin feel like severe burns due to the over stimulation of neural cells in his skin. His father, a master inventor and owner and CEO of his own billion dollar tech company, used a newly invented liquid, biological armor to ease Tony's agony; a buffer allowing him to interact with the world normally, but one he would have to wear for the rest of his life. Despite the pain, he is endowed with regenerative capabilities due to the same mutation that caused the neural cells to differentiate all over his body allowing him to completely regenerate whole body parts if necessary. The biotechnology armor he wears is constructed out of genetically modified bacteria that are able to group together to dissipate kinetic energy when impacted upon, allowing the wearer to withstand tremendous blows and is able to dissolve any metal that can be oxidized. The two disadvantages of this biotech armor, which made it unmarketable, are that it can be easily neutralized by being washed off with antibacterial soap and water and, more importantly, that it will dissolve a normal human's skin after a few hours if not thoroughly washed off. This "side effect" worked well with Tony's regenerative capabilities, seeing as how his skin would regenerate as fast as the armor would eat it making it a perfect fit. Another secondary problem was that, initially, the liquid armor turned his skin a bright blue hue making socialization and the idea of going to a normal school more difficult.
there is the iron maniac, which is a Starrk whose world was destroyed by is technology and so the armor is composed of nanorobot that this can change at any blades, weapons and tools
there is the Mandarin iron that killed Mandarin and recreate and improve power rings of the Mandarin
I even believe that there is a stark tony who replace red richardss in one dimension and makes armor with unstable particles of four fantastic
I think Xander can exceed all stark but it must do so in his way relax and have a mind can with video games (still a teen)
also make sure that they can include a more his friends as the young Tony Stark in IRON MAN ARMORED ADVENTURES and why it proposes to pay them training in trades that may interest them in his business
kendra in music and dance Faith in the car buffy in psychology or other willow in IT oz in logistics tara in Ingenerie (and of course the magic) giles in the commerce, history and archeology for his contacts joyce in art and commemorative effects (a secretary who know the secret of xander and assistance especially after discovering the supernatural)
if your going to see Xander move all his secrets in Lilandra and his ship make its mobile base as the helicopter for the shield?? Xander goes on t he aler worlds as the world advanced Tollan, arshen, nox, asgard, atlantis and steal, hack, copy their database?? is that the DNA of xander can be change again but next time with the dna of the elders?? what glory is when attack is that by xander Pasera extremis (a new super soldier serum in which a stark amalgamate with his armor and becomes stronger, faster, intelligent and able to interact in thought with the technology)?
otherwise you can use the type and design of the armor gundam which has the theme of Souvant knight but also of the angel will see Gundam Wing, Gundam Seed, Gundam 00 and Gundam age and you will see I speak of Iroquois but mostly they have weapons that I think are versatile enough that they could have the level of power required for a Vampire to a glorrificus a + a french reviewer ps writting soon after or take a partner to write when you can not
Review By [sajuuk] • Date [8 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Outstanding series. I have not read your other works but I plan on doing so. I like that you bring other series to the mix but not so much as to overwhelm the story. Thank you for your hard work and for sharing the story. Looking foreword to More when you can. Good luck.
Review By [winddancer] • Date [6 Dec 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
continuing to enjoy the fic ,hope we dont have to wait as long for the next chapter ,keeping the creative juices going is important , i happen to enjoy crossovers with the marvel and dc universes ,but i do have 1 question as it has been 7 months now since the last update , when can we expect the next chapter to arrive? or is it on hiatus ??
Review By [budrick] • Date [19 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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