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Review of chapter "Chapter 29" from DCG
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Wow, was a good time rereading this old thing. If you're still alive some place, i hope your doing ok.


And a bit more sane now.. as these last couple chapters where ploted by a nutball.
Review By [DCG] • Date [10 Jun 14] • Rating [2 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 29" from djhardim
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It sounds as if it would be a good time for Demonbane to make a special guest appearance.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [28 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 29" from DieselDriver
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All that other stuff is fine but please don't leave this one hanging.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [3 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 28" from DieselDriver
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Airlines and the TSA are the bane of civilized people. TSA does NOT mean what they say it means. What it really means is "Thousands Standing Around". There is NOWHERE that I need to go bad enough to fly there unless it's by chartered jet. Since I'm NEVER going to have that kind of money I'll stick to driving. I have a nice comfy pickup truck and a nice comfy travel trailer and I get around, yeah I get around. Oh wait, that's a song too. Darn. When did my life become a musical instead of a comedy?
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [3 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 27" from DieselDriver
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You know, extraneous apologies get old real quick. We know you have problems. We are sorry and would help if we could, at least I would. But I can't so it doesn't do any good whining. The story is fine. I'm glad it's here. I hope you can write more but if it reaches a point where you can't well then you can't. I hope it doesn't get that way and I hate to sound ungrateful and possibly callous but gee whiz, work it out and quit worrying so much. Do what you gotta do, go where you gotta go. Oh wait, that's a song. Never mind.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [3 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 26" from DieselDriver
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Last time I bought a comic book of the Marvel variety Nick Fury was just an extremely able soldier. There wasn't any shield, Spiderman was only a little over 100 issues. I have no idea who deadpool is.

I did have some interesting thoughts about the physics of the marvel universe though. The hulk can jump for at least a mile right? He accelerates to a high enough speed to jump that far in about half of the length of his legs. That has to be hundreds if not thousands of G's of acceleration. His nerve impulses and muscle movement must be close to light speed. How does the ground he's standing on withstand that kind of force? Even concrete would flow like water under that much pressure.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [3 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 25" from DieselDriver
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It did seem short but that's ok. Do me a favor, however slowly, keep writing please. You need the release. Obviously you are a person with ideas, you need to let them out. I used to get that release while riding my motorcycles to and from work, so much better than driving ANY car, it sounds like you need to write. So write when you can, don't worry if it's a lot or a little. Finish a chapter here and there and post them. I know I'll soon be looking for your other stories.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [3 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 24" from DieselDriver
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Maybe, just maybe, I've found an actual fault in your story... Heh, fault, volcano... I couldn't help making a crack (oh another one) about it. I'm sure you're shaking (and another). Don't blow your top (and another) though.

Really now. Capping a volcano without releasing the pressure that caused it to erupt in the first place will just cause a bigger eruption later.

Oh Mayor Wilkins are you ever in for a surprise. There's more than one way to skin a snake. Whoa! That would be a cool trophy to put up on the wall in the warehouse. Hmm. Would that be warehouse 13?
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [3 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 23" from DieselDriver
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Get some REST dude! Chapter was fine except for a few grammar errors. No big thing.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [3 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 22" from DieselDriver
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He doesn't look like a "SILVER" Paladin. Come on, if you can manipulate photos, please put in the correct colors.

And that's the worst thing I can come up with as a criticism. Great Chapter.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [3 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 21" from DieselDriver
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No deadlines as long as you keep working at it. I hope you haven't stopped. I'm getting close to the end of what there is and I don't wanna stop!
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [3 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 20" from DieselDriver
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Good chapter. A bit disjointed because of the new style, I prefer the old way. Hope you're ok.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [3 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 19" from DieselDriver
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NO BIG DEAL!!! Really good chapter. Sorry to hear you had an accident. Hope you weren't injured. I got rear ended at a stop sign while riding a 650 Vstrom, by a guy in a pickup truck. Permanent damage to my cervical discs and NO AMOUNT of money is enough for that. I got $68,000 plus repairs to my bike and medical for the first aid but it wasn't enough for corrective surgery so I will hurt for the rest of my life I suppose. I do however, have a really nice Dodge Pickup.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [3 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 18" from DieselDriver
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Just one point other than another great chapter. They should be using Kendra's new name, Cassandra, and leaving the old one to history lest they inadvertently use the wrong name in front of others. Also, I'm curious about the "Cassie" character from Stargate. Will she be in this story at all? And Cassie would be the perfect, easy to remember and use, nickname for Cassandra.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [3 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 17" from DieselDriver
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WoW has pretty graphics but Everquest is a better game.

The thing asleep inside the planet reminds me of the planet they parked B5 around with the whole interior a mechanical being that interfaced through a Minbari played by John Schuck. Pretty cool.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [3 Apr 14] • Not Rated
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