I like the story, but I don't see the connection between the end of chapter 3 and the beginning of chapter 4. Are they talking about something Anita & JC did in the past, or did something just happen that we missed?
Comments from author:
I knew I left something out, guess that's what I get for writing at three in the morning. It's from Danse Macabre when Anita and Jean-Claude take all of that power from Auggie and share it with their people. ~ Dire Banshee
Review By [neverwill] • Date [8 Jun 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from SusanAnthony
Review:
Poor Xander is going to blow a fuse with all the surprises. I am really enjoying this fic.
Comments from author:
i've never really done a Xander fic before but now that I have I think I know why people like him so much. I'm glad you like this. Tune in for the next story in the series, Faerie-tale. ~Dire Banshee
Review By [SusanAnthony] • Date [7 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Well yeah -- how could you do that to me -- ending it right there.
Mean.
Just mean.
Comments from author:
it was all the Muse's idea, i swear. I just wanted to do a short little fic but she had to go and put an arc in there. *shrug* oh well, next story should be up soon with some answers and probably more questions. Hang in there, hope it'll go fast. ~Dire Banshee
Having just run across this story, I can't believe you just left it hanging there. No............. that's so wrong and so very evil.
Comments from author:
*snicker* I know, but how else would I keep people interested through the five other stories that will (hopefully) make up this series? Plus, being evil is fun ;P
Review By [DennSedai] • Date [6 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Awwww....a cliff hanger?! Please keep going, and soon!
Comments from author:
this story is the first in a series, Angel is part of a larger story arc that takes place over several shorter ones. Bear with me, the muse is being fickle about my updates at the moment. ~Dire Banshee
Review By [Almadynis] • Date [6 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from nightslayer
Review:
yeah, i have to agree with xander this all seems kind of gross. . . and i'm not even talking about the mother/child thing.
Comments from author:
welcome to Xander's life, but it's just so much fun to mess with ;P ~Dire Banshee
Review By [nightslayer] • Date [24 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Weird and full of the sex, but okay, I guess.
Comments from author:
not completely full, not even partially, really, but I'm glad you like it ~Dire Banshee
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [24 May 08] • Not Rated