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Review of chapter "Remembrance" from moonlitrose
Review:
slightly choppy, but I like this story so far. It is an interesting blend I have not seen in multiple crossovers and would like to see more of it, if you can pick it up. I would follow it if you did. :-)
Review By [moonlitrose] • Date [13 Dec 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Xander’s New Start" from eternalfox
Review:
When Giles finds out, he should send Willow to the Devon Coven and have her powers bound until she learns the errors of her ways. As far as Buffy goes, he should reprimand her and cut his emotional ties with her...treating her like a living weapon meant to kill demons and nothing more.
Review By [eternalfox] • Date [20 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Remembrance" from Elleria
Review:
Love this, so very happy to see an update. :-)
Review By [Elleria] • Date [1 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Kate's New Ward" from Martin
Review:
I couldn't get past this chapter. Your writing is so bad it is illiterate.

Your story might be good.
Comments from author:
What's bad about it?
You have to be more specific so I can fix what's wrong.
Review By [Martin] • Date [31 Dec 11] • Rating [1 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Remembrance" from justmeherenobodyelse
Review:
I have a very visual imagination. I'm going to paste a paragraph from the middle of this chapter, then describe the mental image that the typo gave me (for your amusement):

Catty sighed in relief at hearing this. She was very happy on how much better Xander seemed to be doing better now that a few years had passed since Jesse died. She also admitted that it was very helpful that Jon had a personality similar to Jesse’s. Now if only she could find out if Xander remembered his life before the, well what ever happened to him?? The only reason she remembered was because of the suggestion Xander made about putting spells and tech in to a dairy like device to make sure her memories were not messed with. Thank Merlin that she had Jon do the same right after telling him of the magical world! With out the journals Jon would have forgotten all about being adopted by her if the remembering spells on them (the journals) had not worked.

Dairy-like device ... commercial milker? Okay, a commercial milker set up in the spare bedroom (maybe a goat-milker due to space limitations), the flashing of lights as spells settle into the milker ... Harry Potter-esque glowing memory strands swirling in the now spell-proof collection/cooling tank. Maybe the teat-cup whatsits attach to the temples for memory retrieval ... I wonder if memories are better preserved when pasteurized?

Interesting setup on this story, I look forward to seeing where it goes. Meanwhile ... typo ;)
Comments from author:
Thank you going to go fix it now.
Review By [justmeherenobodyelse] • Date [30 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Remembrance" from Bobboky
Review:
very good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [30 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Everyone has Secrets" from Elleria
Review:
:-D
Review By [Elleria] • Date [6 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Everyone has Secrets" from Bobboky
Review:
nice
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [6 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Everyone has Secrets" from Caliadragon
Review:
Thank you for reloading the fic so that it was readable. I amenjoying this and I like how everyone is watching out for Xander, even those that don't realize they are doing so.


Thanks
Calia
Review By [Caliadragon] • Date [5 Nov 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Everyone has Secrets" from Caliadragon
Review:
Could you please reload this chapter? Their are strange characters in the fic and it is hard to read.


Thanks
Calia
Comments from author:
Here it is fixed! Thanks for spotting that for my!
Review By [Caliadragon] • Date [5 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Xander's Goes To His New Home" from Elleria
Review:
Love this. Looking forward to the next bit. Please update soon.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [5 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Xander's Goes To His New Home" from saffronsky
Review:
"The thought of of Danny having a fan club that did not involve the nurses in the infirmary was an odd one."

I love that line!
Review By [saffronsky] • Date [14 Jul 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Xander's Goes To His New Home" from kayron
Review:
The Gods of Twighlight a.k.a. the Greek gods. BuffyVerse, Harry Potter, and Stargate. That is a crossover that I haven't seen before. I love the Xander stories. And getting SG1 to believe anything non-science based is always fun. This story looks like it will be a lot of fun.
Review By [kayron] • Date [14 Jul 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Xander's Goes To His New Home" from zafaran
Review:
{snicker} Oy vay. Poor Xander. I'm glad the error on Buffy and Willow's part left him with his adult memories since that's going to allow him to see "Auntie Kate" for what she really is and give him a chance to avoid Voldemort. When you get the story finished, you might want to find a beta reader to polish the chapters for re-posting 'cause you've got some problems, and the story reads very roughly because of them. I hope your schedule and muse will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm
Comments from author:
Ok you are the second person to say the story comes out rough. The thing is I do have a beta reader. (2 in fact) Can one of you tell what you find as problems and is making it rough. Is the way I have the two gods pop up making seem rough. I know that I do not go in to detail about them but I want to keep them a mystery and work with their character. Am I not explaining them enough? Or am just not getting some thing else right?
Review By [zafaran] • Date [14 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Xander's Goes To His New Home" from Bobboky
Review:
good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [14 Jul 08] • Not Rated
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