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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from azerjaban
Review:
I love it! You had SUCH a good explanation for how everybody came to be in each others reality. I kinda wish it was longer- but its fine the way it is. Good characterization. BUT I hated how it started, the first few lines really belittle your writing.

Keep up the good work!

Azer
Comments from author:
Thanks! I wanted it to be longer, but I've already got two or three other stories I want to finish. There'll be a sequel when I finish the other stories.

I'm not that good at starting fics off, it takes me a while to get into it. However, I'm editing a lot of my fics at the moment and posting them on my Livejournal.

1/4 into the next chapter of NKotB; it's a b*tch of a chapter, really

Thanks for the review!
Review By [azerjaban] • Date [27 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from newestbard
Review:
This totaly blew my brain up, i thought the way it was all linked and the way that it ends leaves it open,
when do we expect a follow up?
Comments from author:
maybe, if i ever get my other main stories finished i'll continue it; 'till then it'll left open. have got plans for it though (:
Review By [newestbard] • Date [7 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)DeepBlueJoy
Review:
That's just a scary little story (big grin)...

I wish... well one should never use the "W" word, but I'll be dangerous and ignore that: I wish you could write a follow up story where the realities 'discovered' that they actually were in the same world, because after all the dimensional walls were only down a very short time, and so only just brought disparate magical and powerful things (SGC) together... A spell that big would require great power -- both the Stargate and Hogwarts are probable sources of huge power and energy, and it's possible that Cassie still retains some residual power with the Naquadah in her blood. Sam and Dean are also powerful users of magic, even though they don't see themselves as wizards. Willow Tara and Spike were at ground zero, so they were already involved.

Anyway, since time and space are part of our reality, maybe they just got scrambled on our plane of existence? *Our* reality got scrambled. That would explain why the portkey worked easily by the way although I really don't see that as an issue the way your other reviewer did.

I think a portkey depends on the power of the creator, so I imagine a portkey could take one _anywhere_ that could be imagined. Since a portkey folds space, it could conceivably connect to other points in other realities space. (remember the multiple SGC teams?) Magic not being limited by our (current) understanding of the laws of physics.

Since you mentioned Cassie had read about HP I came up with this:

Maybe the reason that JK Rowling wrote the Harry Potter series is because she's a disgruntled rare muggle born Slytherin! She's obviously very ambitious, as are all Slytherins. Maybe she had a huge grudge against her house. She hates Slytherin's for rejecting her since she's not a *pure blood*, and really looks up to the admirable and brave Griffyndors. So she ended up poor in the world of muggles - exiled from the wizarding world, but not belonging to the non magical one either.

If rejected by other Slytherin's she would never fit in with other wizards since most others would not trust her. Think about Snape -- maybe she sees herself as Snape -- decent, brave and honorable, but not belonging anywhere, and bitter and alone because of it.

NOTE: (I read somewhere that Rowling actually has actually said she is a witch.)

So she decided that no one would believe her stories to be real, so she wrote them as a novel - and got rich bashing the Slytherins. [that's good revenge!]

SGC, Buffy, and Sam and Dean aren't exactly going around telling the world that they're real... So they could coexist in the world without knowing about each other.

And to explain the presence of the Dragons etc.... 2 possibilities: (1) Both the Buffyverse and HP contain such creatures, or [more likely] (2) They simply could be from Glory's world, since that's where she was headed, maybe the magic was directed there and pulled a few things from her hell dimension... Just a thought.

It is interesting that the Dragon's escape is never addressed in the Buffy universe after Buffy dies... This is as good a finish as any I have heard.

Now you can finish the story... (evil laughter echoes)
please????!!! (begging)
Comments from author:
wow (: i'm definitely thinking of continuing this but it'll have to wait 'till after at least one of my other stories have finished 'cause i want to concentrate on those first.
awesome suggestions though, it's got me thinking about it
thanks for reviewing!
Review By [(Recent Donor)DeepBlueJoy] • Date [23 Jun 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from nicowa
Review:
Loved it, kinda confusing at first. But the imagery of all the realities joining together like that is so cool.
Comments from author:
i always wanted to do this kinda fic (:
thanks for reviewing!
Review By [nicowa] • Date [29 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ThunderGod
Review:
great stuff...but I can see how this can be expanded...and some fun stuff done...

point: a portkey to breach the dimensional barriers?

*realease 2 rabid plot bunnies* go my fiends, have fun and multiply

ThunderGod
Comments from author:
thanks!
maybe i can branch this out into some sequels, but i'm working on trying to finish at least one of my other stories first.
The Portkey thing, yeeahh, i REALLY didn't think that one through; figure old Dumble and the others would be powerful enough to make it happen.
Oh, those bunnies are multiplying alright ;)
Review By [ThunderGod] • Date [29 May 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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