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Review of chapter "Defender of the Earth" from Scrappychic
The story is pretty good. I like it. I definitely see some potential here for a longer story. I'd love to see it continued, there are tons of possibilities.

I mean, who could the man be, since Rose is the first slayer, there are obviously no watchers in this universe... maybe one of the Buffy/Angel characters could be brought over to help start the watcher/slayer line in this reality; maybe Wes when he dies at the end of Not Fade Away. The story could be how they deal with what has happened to them and how they both start over (again).

Good job and hope my little idea help feed the plot bunnies. I'll be tracking just in case. *wink*
Review By [Scrappychic] • Date [3 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Defender of the Earth" from octarinefirefly
I really like this fic. My only problem with it is your use of the common "Rose is paralyzed by the loss of the Doctor" trope, when she seems to me to be much stronger than that.
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review. It is very much appreciated.

I know my Rose is a little on the weepy side, but this is my first attempt to write any character from any other fandom besides Btvs and Ats. I see her as a very strong character myself, but I allowed my own emotions to slip into this fic after just having rewatched the Doomsday episode.
Review By [octarinefirefly] • Date [2 Jun 08] • Not Rated
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