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The Dark Passenger

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Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Gideon
Review:
And I like this story. Hope you continue at some stage!
Review By [Gideon] • Date [13 Jun 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from RevDorothyL
Review:
A lot of nice bits, including this line: "Dawn Summers. Quite a name for someone with a shadowed past."

However, I noticed a lot of missing words or not-quite-right words, indicating that you perhaps wrote this in a hurry and didn't have time to proof-read. Mostly, I could figure out what you meant, but it pulls the reader out of the story, to have to go back and figure out what that sentence was actually trying to say.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [24 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Xeelia
Review:
I love the way this story is going!! Post more soon!!!:)
Review By [Xeelia] • Date [24 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from yuiop
Review:
thanks so much for the story! I love Dexter Stories, but can hardly find them, if you know where more are will you please tell me. Please keep updating!
Review By [yuiop] • Date [24 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Someone Else in the Shadows" from CPTSkip
Review:
I liked this story, a lot. Poor Dexter has just seen the face of true Evil. And a hot chick. Lol!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [6 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Someone Else in the Shadows" from (Past Donor)lucidity
Review:
Oh very cool. Please do continue this!

'lucidty
Review By [(Past Donor)lucidity] • Date [5 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Someone Else in the Shadows" from Fighter
Review:
I like it. Short, but written perfectly. Great job.
Review By [Fighter] • Date [5 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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