Love the fact that you have Buffy using her brain rather than her brawn, it is very refreshing. Hope you get inspired to add a bit more to this story someday!
Review By [Gideon] • Date [11 Nov 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from TroubledFred
Review:
You should come back, theres not enough Buffy/Dexter crossovers and yours is very good. Update please!
Review By [TroubledFred] • Date [5 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Okay, so we got season 2 ep 1. Can we get more? We love this and want more. And we don't know why we are using "we" as the opperative pronoun. We need sleep. FlyingSnake(s)
Review By [slytherinwithwings] • Date [11 Nov 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Interesting idea... I'd love to see more of this story! You need to watch out for your tenses, though. You switch several times between first and third person; try to keep it consistant.
Review By [Bluejello] • Date [5 Nov 08] • Not Rated