Hello; this is a great start! I love how you are writing everyone so far; I am very curious to see how Dawn will do when she is living with Scott, and how the whole thing with Lilah will pan out. This story has definitely piqued my interest. :)
A question, though. What happened to Tara?
Please keep up the great work; I can't wait to read the next chapter!
Review By [Melli] • Date [15 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "the second part" from mithrilandtj
Review:
Is Lilah REALLY working for Scott?
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [10 Jun 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
nice start, can't wait to see where you take it. on a side note, once or twice you've put angle (as in 90 degrees) instead of angel. enjoying this, really hoping to see more soon! love xx Shezzi
I think I may have read the original version of this- but if I have, this version is much improved. I love this concept and really look forward to seeing Dawn and Scott deal with each other. Please update soon!
Review By [littleoldme] • Date [8 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Of course with their luck, Buffy crawled up out of the grave later that night.....then wandered off somewhere. But anyway, this is & should be "Dawn's story" ---though I'd love to see her develop some kind of power especially if she's going to be living with Scott Summers'... and I expect Spike would show up to visit to check on her--
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [8 Jun 08] • Not Rated
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