Brilliant!! I chuckled through their entire "adventure home from the bar". Poor Xander and Spike--someone really must find that cheeky bastard that's been going nuts with the crazy glue!! Damn annoying, that is!! *grin*. That was so much fun!! I'm off to read more!
Comments from author:
Heh heh, glad you liked this one ::grins::
Review By [bliss] • Date [18 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I loved this story. Child!Xander is one of my favourites. I loved all of the little details you added like the acronyms, stolen fries, etc. It was very unique. The only thing that maybe could be improved on was when both Xanders are in the same room, it's sort of hard to figure out who is talking to who. Maybe if one of them had different name that would be a little clearer (i.e. Lex, Alex, Harris). Still, great job.
Comments from author:
Wow, that's wonderful to hear. Very glad you enjoyed young Xander and his relationship with the two Spikes.
Agree that we didn't do as good a job of clarifying which Xander was speaking/acting in scenes where they were together. I think we figured that out and by the time we got to the two spikes, we were using AU!Spike, which... eh, might have detracted some, but did keep things clearer.
Thank you for you lovely and constructive comments. *Hugs*
Review By [Matriarchick] • Date [2 Jul 08] • Not Rated
One of the best stories I've read in a long while. I can't wait to read what you come up with next.
Comments from author:
I'm thrilled by your comments ::grins:: Thank you very much. This was a joint fic with Nash. We're probably going to work on our next chapter of Time After Time next.
Review By [MistressAshley] • Date [1 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I like the story, and even though I usually go for happy endings (gotta have 'em somewhere), the relationship between Xan2 and both Spikes are interesting.
Comments from author:
I'm mostly an HEA writer, tho I do have a few sad endings (few and with warning if involves death). This one's ending should please you ::grins::
Thanks for reading and commenting, much appreciated.
Review By [kayron] • Date [22 Jun 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]