Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ShyBob
The ending was totally unexpected and a neat twist. Keep up the good work.
Review By [ShyBob
] • Date [22 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from SusanAnthony
Very bitter sweet and nicely done.
Review By [SusanAnthony
] • Date [15 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from jcon
How lovely. What a treat. As I type this the tears drip down my cheeks. Thankyou for such a moving piece.
Review By [jcon
] • Date [15 Jun 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Shieldage
Something to be careful about though... One of Piers Anthony's Incarnation books had a baby born in a similar fashion as a gift from either Nature or Time, the (dead) father carried markers for a terrible genetic disease that he hadn't known about and that Nature had forgotten to screen for before she worked her magic. Horrible to not only lose a lover, but to, years later, lose a child thanks to a *gift*
Review By [Shieldage
] • Date [14 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from irialonso
Oh god, that was truly beautiful.
Review By [irialonso
] • Date [14 Jun 08] • Not Rated