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Review of chapter "The chapter that goes like this" from spinella
Review:
spinelli is hot!

you portrayed him very well i loooved your crossover!
Review By [spinella] • Date [19 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The chapter that goes like this" from ScarletStorm
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Its kinda funny that Maxi sorta seems like Cordy from ATS at the chapters end. Very interesting...
Comments from author:
Now that you say that your right, i didn't even realize i did that huh
Review By [ScarletStorm] • Date [11 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The chapter that goes like this" from (Moderator)Teri
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I am glad you updated. I was just thinking of your story the other day. I always hope for Xander or Giles. Of course, I am allways glad to see Jason. I like how Maxie has invited herself to work for Spin. Very Maxie! Nice work as always!
Comments from author:
Thank you, one of my main goals is to keep everyone as in character as possible, especially the GH ones. I mean Dawn and Vi are supposed to be several years older than we last saw them live. However Spinelli and Maxie, you can just flip on your TV and catch them any day at 3.
Review By [(Moderator)Teri] • Date [10 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Saying Goodbye" from (Past Donor)morgyair
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As always enjoyed the lastest chapter and I'm looking forward to the next chapter
Review By [(Past Donor)morgyair] • Date [25 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Saying Goodbye" from (Moderator)Teri
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I am glad Jason is happy for him. I like the mention of Georgie. I still don't understand why they felt the need to kill her off. I really liked her especially with Spin. Nice update. Thanks for an enjoyable story.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you're enjoying it.
Review By [(Moderator)Teri] • Date [24 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "That's what she said!" from (Past Donor)morgyair
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So Xander's the General and Dawn's the wise sister.....that works...continue to look forward to your next update....
Review By [(Past Donor)morgyair] • Date [24 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Here and back again" from ChrissyM
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I love this story. I watch General Hospital dailer and spinelli is my fav character. Right now i'm hoping for a spixie pairing. I would love if Willow could be in this story also and be pairing with Jason. You should post this at the spixie board Opposite attraction. http://z3.invisionfree.com/SpinMax/index.php?act=idx Once again great story.
Review By [ChrissyM] • Date [23 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Here and back again" from (Moderator)Teri
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I am really suprised at how well they have blended together so far. I am not a huge Maxie fan (not in many years anyway), but I think that the Jackal is fun. I am also looking forward to seeing Jason (Jason and Ned are my long time favorites, Jackal a new favorite) perhaps find out about the council and things that go bump in the night. I'd also love to see a war of words (a fun one, not a fight) between Spin and Xander. I look forward to seeing how you continue with this story. Nice work so far.
Comments from author:
I am trying to do justice to a verbal battle of wits between the defender and the jackal, but don't have faith in my ability to do such a scene justice, so if it doesn't come out just right the whole thing might get scrapped, but keep your eyes open for it in the next chapter
Review By [(Moderator)Teri] • Date [22 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Here and back again" from Fyrloche
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LOL Funny and pretty much in character, from what I can remember. Suggestion for knicknames: Xander - Defender; a play on his name and his willingness to do anything to keep his girls safe; Giles - Odin; bit of a stretch here but thinking because of his Allfather status, knowledge, and wisdom. Keep up the good work. Maxie should find out about the night life in true soap fashion; over a period of time and after she has been attacked and saved. I wonder what Jason and Xander would think of each other? No, that is not a request for slash, just a thought of how they can both be pretty scary when it comes to defending the ones they care about. Later.
Review By [Fyrloche] • Date [22 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Here and back again" from mackenziex
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I really don't like soap operas .... but I do like Hacker-boy. He's the only reason I stopped flipping right past General Hospital. Wicked cool cross over.
Comments from author:
thanks, in all honesty i don't rally like soaps myself, but for the sake of Spinelli I am absolutely hook!
Review By [mackenziex] • Date [22 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Here and back again" from (Past Donor)morgyair
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I don't watch GH much but when I do I have to admit loving when Maxie steps into something...
Review By [(Past Donor)morgyair] • Date [21 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Here's the part where she gives her big speech." from (Past Donor)morgyair
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Loved it but now I have another story to track.....course this is not a bad thing...looking forward to the next chapter!
Comments from author:
Well thank you for the track!
Review By [(Past Donor)morgyair] • Date [21 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "It was all going so well, but then you showed up!" from Ninjababe
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When I saw the summary, I went "Spinelli? And BtVS? No way!"

Then, I read it.

I have to say I think you've been able to merge the two quite well... And, since I have a special place in my heart for the Jackal, I am loving this! Can't wait for more...

Now, to get my sister to read it. After all, it's her fault I'm addicted to GH... :)
Comments from author:
Thank you very much, the idea just seemed to click, especially seeing as they haven't explored his parents on the show. I hope your sister enjoys it, and my sister got me hooked on GH as well.
Review By [Ninjababe] • Date [19 Jun 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "It was all going so well, but then you showed up!" from disney
Review:
This is such a cute story, I can't wait until the next chapter. I love Spinelli and the Scoobies together.
Comments from author:
Thank you very much.
Review By [disney] • Date [18 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Connections" from athanor
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Great story so far, you have The Jackal's character down pat. Just one request, find some way to make Georgie not dead! I haven't watched GH since they killed her.
Comments from author:
Unfortunately my feelings are the same with Buffy, that bringing people back from the dead is not right. However, once i get this story out of my system. I do have another one planned for Georgie being called as the TMK is attacking her. But you'll have to wait a bit for that one. XD
Review By [athanor] • Date [17 Jun 08] • Not Rated
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