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Review of chapter "Chapter Four." from bookworm
Review:
Just a minor note on the first scene - at one point it says the vampire lured Alice away but didn't notice Alice following them. Pretty sure the first Alice is meant to be Trish.
Comments from author:
You're very possibly right, this is an old story which I've not looked at for a very long time.

Thanks for reading and reviewing,

D.
Review By [bookworm] • Date [16 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight." from wildcard
Review:
You can't leave it like that!!! More soon, PLEASE!!!
Comments from author:
Don't worry i haven't more on about Friday.

Cheers,
DaveT.
Review By [wildcard] • Date [23 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight." from (Current Donor)MarcusRowland
Review:
That was a bit careless of Sylvie etc. You'd almost think they wanted a sequel ;-)
Comments from author:
Yeah she signed a contract for a full season!

Cheers,
DaveT.
Review By [(Current Donor)MarcusRowland] • Date [23 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight." from Mcspender
Review:
Excellent fic Dude!.
It's kinda hard to review a fic based in a a couple of TV series that I've never seen before, but you managed to pick up my interest in them=).
Gonna search for them in the usual places; by the way Hasseldorf... the guy is really looking for it, me thinks is has to get one for all his troubles =P.

See ya!!.
Comments from author:
The 'Dorf has been beaten many times but he keeps coming back for more...MAW-HA-HA!

Glad I got you interested in 'New Tricks' and 'Yes Minister/Prime Minister'.

Cheers,
DaveT.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [23 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight." from LordCorwin
Review:
Nice updates ....

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But Shades of XXX Anime!?!?!?! ... Tentacles???? -- *grin*tongue in cheek* -- How cliche. And there weren't any leeetle Japanese girls in there either.....
Oh bother.

Just a small NIT -- Umm, Are you sure you're going to be able to handle ALL the plots that are going on in this story???
Comments from author:
Yes the lack of Japanese schoolgirls was an over site.

Plotlines...yes I know what you mean but I think I'll manage. Sir Humphrey will be a recurring character useful when I need some sort of official story line.

I'm sorta planning another 'New Tricks' story, depends what happens in the next season.

Demon Lords, alway good for a bad guy when you've got nothing else planned.

We'll see how it goes...that's half the fun!

all the best,

DaveT.
Review By [LordCorwin] • Date [23 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six." from LordCorwin
Review:
Nicely done ... very well done .. just a quicky though .. when you bringing in the Scoobies .. or A scoobie .... ie: XANDER!!!!!!
They're all HIS girls .... hmmmm
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review.

Now, I'm just guessing here but...you'd like Xander in a Slaughtered Lamb story?

Well actually that might be possible, not next story (which has Wombles in it) but the story after that could have both Xander and Faith fitted in quite nicely (in this reality Xander and Faith are in a long term relationship). I shall think on it.

All the best,
DaveT.
Review By [LordCorwin] • Date [21 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six." from (Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood
Review:
Ouch. That ought to drive the point home...
Comments from author:
You're not wrong.

Cheers for the review.

DaveT.
Review By [(Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood] • Date [21 Jun 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six." from (Moderator)jrabbit
Review:
You know, I think you may be onto something with this 'demon tunnelling under Kings Cross' idea. I can't think of any other reason why it would take over 10 years to rebuild a tube station.
Comments from author:
You have a good point...and whats all this digging up the roads to replace the 'water pipes'? Hmmmm? I don't believe that for a second...and where have all the down 'n' outs gone from Tottenham Court Road? Something eaten them?

Weird place London.

All the best,
DaveT.
Review By [(Moderator)jrabbit] • Date [21 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four." from MachiavelliJr
Review:
Jim Hacker the demon-summoner? What next, Sir Humphrey staking vampires? I'm fairly sure Hacker hasn't got the gumption to do any sort of magic; he hesitates to be rude to the French...
Still a great idea though, and the plot looks to be interesting. Small wonder Sir Humphrey got on with the Council in its old incarnation; I reckon he'll have a lot less patience with the new one once he works out the differences. Watchers not being Oxbridge men? Watchers not being in charge? Oh dear me no.
Comments from author:
To my mind the ONLY way Hacker would get anywhere in government was by making a deal with...someone!

The thing Sir H doesn't like is change. Ok change was forced on him when the old council was blown up but government control is just a step too far. Sir H will return as a recurring character in later stories (you've already given me and idea...Sir H tries to resurrect the old Council...not literally...but then again...) we'll see how it goes.

Cheers,
DaveT.
Review By [MachiavelliJr] • Date [19 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four." from YademosEbyam
Review:
Finally, a perfectly reasonable explanation as to how James Hacker managed to rise to high political office. ;) Except, of course, this suddenly makes Sir Humphery a champion of the Light, and the civil service establishment part of its armies. (shudder!) Way too weird even for British comedy. Next you'll have career civil servants leaving Top Secret documents on the Tube. ;)
Comments from author:
Of course that's the beauty of fiction you can explore all these fantastic situations that would never happen in REAL life.

I know weird isn't Sir H being a good guy?

Thanks for your review it made me laugh!

all the best,
DaveT.
Review By [YademosEbyam] • Date [19 Jun 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four." from AllenPitt
Review:
I can see how there'd be a huge problem between Buffy and the new batch of slayers. B. is used to going it alone, having no one else to help against an ocean of vamps etc, and thinks the new ones have it too easy etc.... all the scoobs probably have that attitude come to think of it...
Anyway--the rising tide of vamps everyone's finding is really interesting.... that's the problem with them,they can 'reproduce' in a single night, multiple times, so if they start to feel threatened...they can ramp up their numbers very quickly....
The new demonic attempt to take over management of slayers is great, too---
Comments from author:
Thank-you VERY much for the review.

As this was a 're-post/rewrite' I didn't expect much in the way of reviews...but not to get any! Oh the shame!!! So cheers.

I think you're referring to Alice's problems with Buffy, this will be explored in later stories maybe the next one in the series. None of these girls have actually met Buffy or indeed any of the 'old gang'. So they are taking their cue's from Mrs F and Alice the only people who have met Buffy.

Yep old Hasseldorf just keeps trying.

All the best,
DaveT.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [19 Jun 08] • Not Rated
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