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Review of chapter "The Kiss" from andiesimmo
Review:
hey sorry i have only just read this story and now i have I LOVE IT, so would there be any thing at all that could maybe get you to write some more, cause in-case you didn't catch this tiny fact I LOVE IT and it would be great if there was lots and lots more, so please please PLEASE PLEASE update soon thanks :)
Review By [andiesimmo] • Date [11 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Kiss" from (Recent Donor)ArgyleButterfly
Review:
This is such a cute story I hope you haven't abandoned it. I've really enjoyed it thus far!
Review By [(Recent Donor)ArgyleButterfly] • Date [1 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Kiss" from nightshadowlife
Review:
awwww now just to get the buffy/severus smoochies going!
Review By [nightshadowlife] • Date [2 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The-I-have-my-reasons-speech" from spring
Review:
Oh this is an interesting little plot twist. I'm glad that Willow and Buffy are getting Snape to come out of his shell, perhaps he wont join the Death Eaters? Maybe the two hellmouth vets can get Lucius to be his own person and not become his father? As always I love this wonderful chapter and I eagerly await the next chapter.
Review By [spring] • Date [26 Nov 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The-I-have-my-reasons-speech" from nightshadowlife
Review:
awesome chappie, if you need someone to beta for you send it to me, my email is jessica.burt@cox.net

AWESOME :)
Comments from author:
Thanks, I will!
So check your email account soon^^
Review By [nightshadowlife] • Date [24 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Voldemort and Secret Powers" from nightshadowlife
Review:
Interesting chapter. lol Its kinda nice to see Sirius get shot down not once but twice in a way....:)
Hope to see more soon!
Comments from author:
I know, I never really liked Sirius, he's kind a brat!
No offense to those who like him, but I don't!^^
Review By [nightshadowlife] • Date [8 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Gryffindor vs. Slytherin" from Miranda
Review:
I think you have a very good story, It can definitly benefit from a beta to correct present and past tense. I think once you have that rounded out your story will be great.

hopefully the other reviewer helps you out.

You can also post a bulletin in your story saying your looking for a beta, it comes up as a gold bar at the bottom of the chapter.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I hope it will work out good!
Review By [Miranda] • Date [5 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Voldemort and Secret Powers" from Shanna
Review:
You have a really good plot going here, so I'm sad to see so many grammatical, spelling and word usage errors, as well as the bad space formatting. The dialogue also seems stilted as well in many places.

I would suggest a beta to help you work through some of these things. I saw in one review that English isn't your first language so I can see how you wouldn't catch some of these things. If you are interested in having someone look over your chapters and help with the flow, even if you want to go back to the beginning of the story for editing, I'd be happy to help you.

Either way I look forward to reading more of Willow and Buffy's adventures at Hogwarts.
Comments from author:
Thank you for your constructive criticism, I always grateful for those who take time to point some mistakes out!
And thanks for not telling me to read it again, out loud or backwards, because I have already re-read fifty million times and the mistakes I haven't found until now won't be found by reading again^^

It would be really great if you could be my beta and I guess it would make sense to start with the first chapter and wait with further new chapters until we finished editing the older ones!

So how are going to do this? Should I send you the chapters by mail?
Review By [Shanna] • Date [3 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Voldemort and Secret Powers" from spring
Review:
I love this story. The reason I didn't gave you a 9 is because of the fact that you used "!" in many cases when it shouldn't have been used. Other than that I love it and eagerly await the next installment.
Review By [spring] • Date [2 Sep 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Voldemort and Secret Powers" from kiwi
Review:
great chapter. :D
Comments from author:
Damn you're fast^^
And thanks
Review By [kiwi] • Date [2 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Buffy" from nightshadowlife
Review:
nice chapter...Hope to see more soon
Comments from author:
Thanks, I will try to update more often now!
Review By [nightshadowlife] • Date [15 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Buffy" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
Review:
So glad Buffy has shown up now. They are going to completely change the future. I look forward to seeing how.
Comments from author:
Yes, it will be so much fun to let them cause some trouble in the wizarding world, they won't know what him them ^^
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [14 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Buffy" from winnie
Review:
Glad to see that this is on the update list, it is well worth it. Looking forward to the next update.
Comments from author:
Yes, I will update more often now, so stay tuned!
Review By [winnie] • Date [14 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The truth and a spell" from spring
Review:
Someone put a damper spell on Willow? I wonder if that and the fact that she is adopted is because her parents were trying to protect her? Again I love this wonderful story and I look forward to the next installment.
Comments from author:
Maybe...^^
And thanks for your review!
Review By [spring] • Date [12 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The truth and a spell" from Aleria
Review:
Really interesting story so far. I really hope you add more to it soon. Thanks for sharing it!
Comments from author:
No problem,
I will try to update more frequently though!
Review By [Aleria] • Date [9 Jul 09] • Not Rated
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