Ahh, she found and befriends Jesse and Xander anyway, I love it. You almost made my heart stop though I thought Ms Calendar had married Xander's abusive dad eeeh gah. But she's adopted him two cheers for a healthy Xander, hip hip hooray. ooh are they vying for our Willow's affection's the two gigolo's?
Comments from author:
nah, Ms calender wouldn't marry someone like that :)
yes, xander is free of that self-pitying drunk of a dad. yay!
Review By [christytrekkie] • Date [4 Jan 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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Comments from author:
thank you
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [10 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Oooh! I kinda saw where you were building up to it but I'm still so excited that your making it Willow/Jessie. Jessie doesn't get enough love, dying early and all. :)
Comments from author:
i know, i was hoping before the buffy seasons ended that the writers would bring Jesse back, but nope- it would have been cool if they'd brought Jesse back briefly like the Stargate writers did with Kawalsky- he got about 2 or 3 episode appearances in after her died.
ok, 3 fast friends...and at least B. won't have to give the whole speech to them, hee---should be fun when she shows up. Will they know her name, or just that the slayer is in town? Might be funny if there were a couple of transfer students and they weren't sure which was which, at first---
Comments from author:
transfer students? heh, yeah that would be funny.
thanks for the review
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [9 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Ummm...is Buffy going to make an appearance in this story?
Comments from author:
yep, but at the moment it's the holidays so she hasn't moved yet; i'm putting buffy at the first day of the new year but i got the feeling that, in canon, she came in the middle of sophomore year. so she's going to appear in the story but not for a while
thanks for reviewing!
Review By [JanessaRavenwood] • Date [9 Jul 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Back from vacation to find this ---thanks! It's weird to see a willow & Xander who haven't known each other since age 5.... hopefully Jesse will pull through. I imagine Willow & Xander will be angry with Buffy initially on finding she doesn't want to slay. (though at the power level she's showing, why would anyone need a slayer? That's a potential plot problem, maybe it takes time to do big spells like that, no good in a fight?
Comments from author:
Slaying's Buffy's job; it would catch up to her later even if she did run off; besides the council wouldn't let her get away from it that easily. thanks for the review! Hope you had a nice vacation
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [7 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Hmn, wonder if Jenny and Giles will hit it off like in cannon?
Comments from author:
yep, now i have Xander away from his awful parents and Willow away from her's (well, the ones in canon anyway) i hate bad parents, both of them deserved better and they got better X)
Giles and Jenny probably will...(: then Willow and Xander would be step-siblings- wooo!
thanks for reviewng!
Review By [Satori] • Date [29 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
You did a wonderful job in capturing the emotions Willow was feeling. Good visuals to, like how she half sob/snorted. Only thing that kind of stands out is flying car. It just seems a bit over the top. Other then that great chapter and can't wait for more!
Wispr
Comments from author:
thank you!
yeah i know, but ever since i saw 'Harry Potter 2' i've always wanted to do a flying-car scene; besides there was a load of traffic which i hate, so it was mostly a statement to the stupidities of traffic-jams. :)
Review By [MissingAuthor] • Date [29 Jun 08] • Not Rated
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