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Review of chapter "chapter 6" from Vickzie
Review:
Lol cool story
Review By [Vickzie] • Date [20 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter 6" from Mordare
Review:
I really liked this one. You should think about restarting it sometime.
Review By [Mordare] • Date [27 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter 6" from (Recent Donor)christytrekkie
Review:
Hey don't stop there continue!! Pretty please. :(
Comments from author:
I'm writing NKotB at the moment, but it's definitely not a dead fic.

thanks for the reviews!
Review By [(Recent Donor)christytrekkie] • Date [4 Jan 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from (Recent Donor)christytrekkie
Review:
Ahh, she found and befriends Jesse and Xander anyway, I love it. You almost made my heart stop though I thought Ms Calendar had married Xander's abusive dad eeeh gah. But she's adopted him two cheers for a healthy Xander, hip hip hooray. ooh are they vying for our Willow's affection's the two gigolo's?
Comments from author:
nah, Ms calender wouldn't marry someone like that :)

yes, xander is free of that self-pitying drunk of a dad. yay!
Review By [(Recent Donor)christytrekkie] • Date [4 Jan 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)christytrekkie
Review:
Interesting start. I like your take on this so far Willow as Giles' daughter and no Xander as a childhood friend hmmmm. On to the next chappy. :-))
Comments from author:
thanks!
Review By [(Recent Donor)christytrekkie] • Date [4 Jan 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter 6" from Dragonelf
Review:
::Feeds the plot bunny::


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Science cannot solve the ultimate mystery of nature. And that is
because, in the last analysis, we ourselves are part of nature
and therefore part of the mystery that we are trying to solve.
- Max Planck
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Comments from author:
thank you
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [10 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter 6" from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
Review:
Good chapter, really did well getting across Willow's anxiety over Fessie's being hurt.

Wispr
Comments from author:
thanks!
glad you liked it
Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [9 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter 6" from smolder
Review:
Oooh! I kinda saw where you were building up to it but I'm still so excited that your making it Willow/Jessie. Jessie doesn't get enough love, dying early and all. :)
Comments from author:
i know, i was hoping before the buffy seasons ended that the writers would bring Jesse back, but nope- it would have been cool if they'd brought Jesse back briefly like the Stargate writers did with Kawalsky- he got about 2 or 3 episode appearances in after her died.

thanks for the review!
Review By [smolder] • Date [9 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter 6" from AllenPitt
Review:
ok, 3 fast friends...and at least B. won't have to give the whole speech to them, hee---should be fun when she shows up. Will they know her name, or just that the slayer is in town? Might be funny if there were a couple of transfer students and they weren't sure which was which, at first---
Comments from author:
transfer students? heh, yeah that would be funny.

thanks for the review
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [9 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter 6" from (Recent Donor)JanessaRavenwood
Review:
Ummm...is Buffy going to make an appearance in this story?
Comments from author:
yep, but at the moment it's the holidays so she hasn't moved yet; i'm putting buffy at the first day of the new year but i got the feeling that, in canon, she came in the middle of sophomore year.
so she's going to appear in the story but not for a while

thanks for reviewing!
Review By [(Recent Donor)JanessaRavenwood] • Date [9 Jul 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from AllenPitt
Review:
Back from vacation to find this ---thanks! It's weird to see a willow & Xander who haven't known each other since age 5.... hopefully Jesse will pull through. I imagine Willow & Xander will be angry with Buffy initially on finding she doesn't want to slay. (though at the power level she's showing, why would anyone need a slayer? That's a potential plot problem, maybe it takes time to do big spells like that, no good in a fight?
Comments from author:
Slaying's Buffy's job; it would catch up to her later even if she did run off; besides the council wouldn't let her get away from it that easily.
thanks for the review!
Hope you had a nice vacation
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [7 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from smolder
Review:
Oh dear. I hope Jessie will be alright. And I hope Giles realises how harsh he was being.

Very good though Pez. Very real. I'm glad your showing all of this time before school starts and they meet Buffy.
Comments from author:
i wanted to give some time before Buffy came; Willow/Jesse/Xander could get to know each other first.
thanks for the review!
Review By [smolder] • Date [5 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Satori
Review:
Awww, Jenny adopted Xan? How cute!

Hmn, wonder if Jenny and Giles will hit it off like in cannon?
Comments from author:
yep, now i have Xander away from his awful parents and Willow away from her's (well, the ones in canon anyway) i hate bad parents, both of them deserved better and they got better X)

Giles and Jenny probably will...(: then Willow and Xander would be step-siblings- wooo!

thanks for reviewng!
Review By [Satori] • Date [29 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
Review:
You did a wonderful job in capturing the emotions Willow was feeling. Good visuals to, like how she half sob/snorted. Only thing that kind of stands out is flying car. It just seems a bit over the top. Other then that great chapter and can't wait for more!

Wispr
Comments from author:
thank you!

yeah i know, but ever since i saw 'Harry Potter 2' i've always wanted to do a flying-car scene; besides there was a load of traffic which i hate, so it was mostly a statement to the stupidities of traffic-jams. :)
Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [29 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Dragonelf
Review:
::Feeds the plot bunny::
Comments from author:
thanks
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [29 Jun 08] • Not Rated
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