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Review of chapter "Meet Garlic Exposition, Basil's Little Brother" from Jena
Review:
Love this story so far, hope you update soon!
Review By [Jena] • Date [29 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Meet Garlic Exposition, Basil's Little Brother" from BerserkerNW
Review:
Great story so far. It's a little fast-paced, but that happens. I like your idea for how the Sons got their power. Is it Dawn/the Key that's mentioned in the book? As for getting the girlfriends out of the way, could you maybe strip Chase's power and pair him up with Sarah, Kate, or both? That would keep him alive, possibly grant the other boys more power (since it's only divided four ways instead of five), and take care of both girls without having Caleb or Pogue upset about a dead girlfriend. Of course, another option would be to send the girlfriend(s) out of town. Sarah transfered in, it's possible they would both be transfered out.

I look forward to reading more of this, if you ever get the interest for it back! ^_^
Review By [BerserkerNW] • Date [24 Aug 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Meet Garlic Exposition, Basil's Little Brother" from ptbptb
Review:
This was really intriguing, and I hope to see it continued one day.
Review By [ptbptb] • Date [27 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Meet Garlic Exposition, Basil's Little Brother" from Bella
Review:
This is awesome please update more! I love the pairing Dawn/Reid lol
Review By [Bella] • Date [6 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Meet Garlic Exposition, Basil's Little Brother" from leelaa
Review:
Damn good so far. Please update soon. Please.
Comments from author:
Thanks for your review, but I can't promise. I am working on a very large original universe and have been blocked on everything else for a while.
Review By [leelaa] • Date [6 Dec 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Comes the Dawn" from ArinnaBlack
Review:
Love it. Update soon?
Review By [ArinnaBlack] • Date [14 Jun 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Meet Garlic Exposition, Basil's Little Brother" from Alianna
Review:
pretty ok chapter, it will be interesting to read the next one!
Comments from author:
Thank you for reviewing.
Review By [Alianna] • Date [3 Jan 09] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Meet Garlic Exposition, Basil's Little Brother" from LovinXovers
Review:
wicked!!!!
can't wait for more
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Comments from author:
More is going to have to wait until I watch the movie again. I am ordering the DVD by this weekend though, so probably next week unless I get caught up in one of my others.
Review By [LovinXovers] • Date [3 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Meet Garlic Exposition, Basil's Little Brother" from moonstarsfu
Review:
I'm totally enjoying this story so far. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review, I'm glad you're enjoying it.
Review By [moonstarsfu] • Date [3 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Black Eyed Chases" from DemonChildeKyra
Review:
I love this so far! Please, please, please continue? I can't wait to see how you get Dawn with each of the boys! More soon, please?

~ Kyra
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review and I'm glad you like it. I am working on it, I promise, it's just slow going because I'm also working on four other stories at the same time.
Review By [DemonChildeKyra] • Date [15 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Black Eyed Chases" from (Current Donor)AshDawnSoulmates
Review:
I really enjoyed this story...what there is of it yet and I hope you update soon. I can already tell that Dawn's involvement is gonna have a major impact and I can't wait to see!
Comments from author:
Thank you, I hope you enjoy what I do with it.
Review By [(Current Donor)AshDawnSoulmates] • Date [15 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Black Eyed Chases" from Melli
Review:
Great chapter! I loved the dynamics between the boys and Dawn, and Reid and Tyler's bickering. Especially Reid's reluctant grousing and Tyler's smacking him. :)

I think you are doing a great job of weaving her into the plot; I wonder how differently things are going to go since they found out so early who was causing all of the trouble? I also love that she can sense it when they are using their powers; that will come in handy, particularly if you write her into the bar scene where the boys are taking bets on that girl's underwear. :-p

Please keep up the excellent work; I can't wait to read the next chapter!
Comments from author:
Thanks! I'm glad you like it.
Review By [Melli] • Date [5 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Black Eyed Chases" from Jess
Review:
Me likely! *HUGS*
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [Jess] • Date [5 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Comes the Dawn" from chajalive
Review:
With Dawn getting four boys, maybe put the girls together, if that is your kind of thing.
Comments from author:
I'm not against it, necessarily, I'll think about it. Thanks.
Review By [chajalive] • Date [25 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Comes the Dawn" from Alianna
Review:
the beginning is ok, its still peaked my interest though!
Review By [Alianna] • Date [23 Jun 08] • Rating [6 out of 10]
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