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Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from StoryBlender
Review:
I'm looking forward to an update soon.
Review By [StoryBlender] • Date [27 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Arekanderu
Review:
brilliant :)
Review By [Arekanderu] • Date [17 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from FireWolfe
Review:
I like this. Interestng start. An army of slayers would sure mess with moldy's plans.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [20 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from (Recent Donor)redjacobson
Review:
Well now; you certainly know how to make Dru's voice come alive! Very interesting story and I would like to see it continued. I hope that Luna's attraction to Ginny isn't all one sided, and I'm curious, did Luna have these feelings before being called, or just since then?

red
Review By [(Recent Donor)redjacobson] • Date [27 Dec 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Olade
Review:
I notice you haven't updated this story for a long time. I really hope that you are still continuing this story. It's written marvellously. And I love the plot. The inclusion of Marietta Edgecombe was intriguing, why is she in the story? Well, anyway, pray do update.
Comments from author:
Thank you for the kind words. I've recently returned to work on the story after a long hiatus, and will hopefully have the next chapter ready to post by the end of the month.
Review By [Olade] • Date [27 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Samarkand
Review:
Oh, now this is interesting! I like that you're concentrating on the lesser characters rather than the main cast. And you Drusilla is exquisitely mad and evil.
Review By [Samarkand] • Date [10 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from ecbookworm
Review:
Well. Crazy madwoman meets crazy vampwoman. No wonder Bellatrix is interested. I love the fact Luna Lovegood is in the thick of it, and her voice is coming through clearly. Can't wait for the next update!
Review By [ecbookworm] • Date [10 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from cbq
Review:
Very nice story, well written with good characterisation and you're not rushing it at all. Excellent.
Review By [cbq] • Date [10 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from (Past Donor)Skyefather
Review:
wow Dru the mad has come to the game (and I love the way you show us just how crazy Dru really is) this is getting better and better. so which slayers are going to find Luna? Maybe Kennedy? and how dose the wizarding world view gay's? waiting for the next ch. with baited breath!!!!!!!

*Hugs&Kisses*
Review By [(Past Donor)Skyefather] • Date [10 Sep 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from physicsteach
Review:
Excellent so far. Points to you for:

Characters - you clearly know the HP characters and, so far, are writing them in, well, character.

Perspective - one of the most telling characteristics of good writing is a consistent and well-chosen point of view, and you've nailed it.

Dialog - well done.

I"m eager for more. I'd suggest keeping an eye out for pomposity; you're clearly ambitious with this work, and it's going well so far, but you're kind of heading in that direction, if you see what I mean.
Review By [physicsteach] • Date [1 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from emagicu
Review:
This is really well-written and intriguing so far. You have the voices down very well. I can't wait to read more and see where it's going!
Review By [emagicu] • Date [30 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from AngusH
Review:
I remarkable story, it's really beautifully written.

Luna as a slayer is something I don't think I've ever seen before, but it's a great idea.

I'm really looking forward to seeing how this continues.
Review By [AngusH] • Date [30 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from manic
Review:
Thank you for the update. I was a little disappointed that not much of the chapter focused on Luna. But with further updates, that will pass ;) I look forward to more.
Review By [manic] • Date [29 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Moderator)acs
Review:
Okay... this isn't the first Luna the Vampire Slayer story I've read but unlike the other one (that I remember being extremely Mary-Sueish) yours at least makes sense and is true to the HP characters.

It is off to an interesting start. And finally a use for those darn centaurs.
Review By [(Moderator)acs] • Date [29 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Satori
Review:
I usually can't stand HP/Buffy crossovers, but yours is fantastically well written, and I love how it focuses on Nev, Luna and Gin instead of Harry (whom i'm quite sick of, thank you).

Please write more. Your voices for all the characters are fantastic. Ginny sounds both real and like the Ginny of the books, which is better than 99% of HP fanfics out there already. And your Luna is wonderful.
Review By [Satori] • Date [29 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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