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Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from spring
Review:
I love this wonderful fic.
Review By [spring] • Date [3 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from (Past Donor)Skyefather
Review:
great story I'd love to see a follow up
hint hint

*hugs&kisses*
Review By [(Past Donor)Skyefather] • Date [14 Jul 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Alianna
Review:
That was a nice story, would have liked to have read a chapter showing how Draco's life changed with Cordy and Susie in his life...
Review By [Alianna] • Date [10 Jul 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from LadyNiteRaven
Review:
MORE please. This is AWSOME!
Review By [LadyNiteRaven] • Date [25 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from purrfus
Review:
I liked the idea, but I was not able to read through to the end. Maybe I'll come back later and try again.

The content of the story seems to be ok. The problem for me is the format. The paragraphs are really dense and trying to follow them was making my eyes ache.

When having a character give long explanations or a monologue it is acceptable to use multiple paragraphs. And it makes it easier to read.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [25 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from angelfanic
Review:
Hey, I really enjoyed this. Is there any possibility of a sequal. I would love it if there was more. Thanks Heather
Review By [angelfanic] • Date [25 Jun 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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