Definite potential here; hope you're planning on continuing it (Particularly if you add in Clark's meteor-freak enemies; might be interesting to see Dawn's reaction to her brother having to fight those suckers as well as confronting a literal God...).
Just one query; will he be encountering the Watcher's Council at any point, given that they were the ones who originally told Buffy about GLory's true nature?
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [9 Dec 09] • Not Rated
I am enjoying this story so far; the characters and relationship are looking really good, the plot "re-weaving" so that the Key/Glory storyline fits Smallville is being done quite well. I would however love to see you write updates faster.
I have one question/thought, if Dawn is made of Clark Blood/DNA can she even be cut for the ritual's portal opening?
Review By [Aynot] • Date [14 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I love that Dawn is younger in this version, and you've created an adorable sibling relationship here (which I actually prefer to the Dawn/Buffy season five relationship quite a bit). Hope you update soon!
Review By [littleoldme] • Date [28 Jun 08] • Not Rated