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Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from AriaDragoncrest
Review:
Good story so far
Comments from author:
Is it wrong to admit that I'd forgotten this? Your review made me read it over. I think I'm gonna do an edit and get some new chapters up.
- D
Review By [AriaDragoncrest] • Date [20 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from pixxy
Review:
Are you going to be adding more to this? Cause Ive got to say, it's pretty awesome so far.
Review By [pixxy] • Date [18 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from JediKnight
Review:
Very interesting job on this story so far, please do your best to add more soon.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [9 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from (Past Donor)Skyefather
Review:
AAAggr Another short ch. but fun anyway can't wait for next update

*Hugs*Kisses*
Review By [(Past Donor)Skyefather] • Date [18 Sep 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from grd
Review:
Too bad Bats was not there to hear that. Paranoid git would be up in arms. Eager for more. Thank you.
Review By [grd] • Date [16 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from (Recent Donor)christytrekkie
Review:
oh no this isn't the end I love this story please more. I love your buffy season 5 ending better
Review By [(Recent Donor)christytrekkie] • Date [16 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from newt
Review:
worth the wait - pleeeeeeease write more, pleaaaaaaaaaase
Review By [newt] • Date [16 Sep 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Dragonelf
Review:
Yay, new chapter! :D

::Gives the plot bunny some carrot soup::

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A library is just a genteel black hole that can read
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [16 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Oh, fun. You are making her a comics fan - but of course she had to at least bone up on the animated versions to help her crush on Xander give her something to chat about. Thanks for sharing and updating.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [16 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Glad you're continuing this, and I LOVE Dawn's reaction to learning she'd just met the 'real' Batman!
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [16 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from AllenPitt
Review:
general knowledge of secret identities is probably higher for DC heroes than Marvel especially before the Spiderman films came out. So even if she's only watched cartoons she'd know Batman's, Superman's, the Flash, Green Lantern stuff like that. Plus stuff about the future ( Legion of Super Heroes) and all sorts of weird facts depending on how many comics she's read...
Batman would NOT like hearing that there's a film out that millions have seen in her reality, dealing with his personal life...
Even beyond that, she likely knows weaknesses ( color yellow for GL ring) stuff like that. or that there's a Fortress of Solitude where Superman keeps all sorts of neat stuff.
Could be funny: In her reality there have been superman comics for 50+ years, she'd be all like "when are you finally going to get together with Lois? In my lifetime maybe?
Comments from author:
I'm going to muck around with the time lines quite a bit actually, but other it's all in fun. Such as my problem with Batman and Diana sort-of and sort-of-not having a thing in JLU, especially since I am a hardcore Catwoman/Batman shipper. I was always bummed that catwoman wasn't part of the JLU or even included in any of the episodes. I love catwoman.
As for Dawn reading comics .... Xander was her babysitter. Plus, who wouldn't love Smallville at her age? Only I'm gonna have her crush on Micheal Rosenbaum (because I do) and be mad about Lex being bad. Should be interesting. That all could change at any moment due to extreme ADD.
- Damia
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [16 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from AllenPitt
Review:
ok, so at some point she'll realize that wasn't just a guy dressing as Batman, it was Batman. Then the snark might start...right now of course she thinks B. is dead----
They must have a lot of questions for her, that should be fun---
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [8 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Dragonelf
Review:
::Feeds the plot bunny::
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [1 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from magik
Review:
I really liking this story. Of course the Bat can't handle teenage girls sobbing their hearts out...emotionless little...! Poor Dawn, I hope someone attends to her soon.
Review By [magik] • Date [1 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from NutsContract
Review:
Oh wow.... he's horrible with teenage girls. I mean really... just leave the poor girl crying there, why don't you? Nightwing burned down the batcave... is that even possible? Update soon, please and thank you!!
Review By [NutsContract] • Date [30 Jun 08] • Not Rated
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