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Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Seven" from sprig
Review:
this story is just too cool!! glad that Xander and Willow finally got their memories back with the help of Tara and it's gonna be real interesting to see how the different dimensions collide together.
Review By [sprig] • Date [11 Oct 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Seven" from serenityselena
Review:
oh dear... this keep getting more complicated for our heroes...
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [31 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Seven" from draconis
Review:
I hope it's just my imagination but we've already seen what happens when you add a caring, good character named "Ben"...and he just happens to be a doctor...and now you've tossed in that Faith has "a feeling that something was going to go wrong", that "Something bad was passing straight over their heads, and they didn’t even know it."...

Although with Willow now remembering everything, and once again able to control the magic, it would be a different game. I guess the results (even if my possible scenario is wrong) will hinge on whether or not she can handle the power with a de-aged body.
Review By [draconis] • Date [25 Aug 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Seven" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Take all the time and chapters you need -- I'm still hooked, and looking forward to a satisfying (I hope?) conclusion.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [24 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Seven" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Hmm, bad stuff all around.
You have me worried, I don't see a good way for this to end well...good build up of tension!

Thanks for a great story!
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [24 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Six" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Great story, very emotional in places, the emotion was well handled.
The confusion and fear of the 6 year old versions of the Scoobys was very well handled.

I look forward to seeing how you finish this up!
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [4 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Six" from smolder
Review:
Got caught up again. Still making me so happy and excited when I read it. The bit a few chapters ago that just hit me was:

"His words cut through her like glass, and she realised that she’d forgotten a part of herself; that part of her that didn’t trust adults, that grown-ups lied and broke promises... like her parents did- like their friends did!"

---Oooh. That was just. Oooh. I mean you have bits that just juxtapose the little kid mindset with the bits of Scooby memories so well. And now they have their memories back completely while still in little bodies! I really am excited to see what you do with this - how you'll play the interactions now that they are different mentally. I was also intrigued by the Rack connection and glad that you are having Dawn react so harshly because honestly, I think see would. She, probably more that any of them, has the sharpest and angriest memories of him.

And of course, major love for Ben. And the little romance developing with Janet and him is beyond cute.
Comments from author:
Thanks!

Rack's connection to Willow and Xander's 'disappearence' will be revealed in the next and, hopefully last, chapter.

Do you know how I can get a beta on really short notice? I need to make sure that the last chapter(s) is realistic, so I'm just looking to bounce ideas around with someone.

Yep, Ben's my second favourite OC, next to Chris, the romance will be addressed in the next chapter(s).

Thanks for reviewing!
Review By [smolder] • Date [2 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Six" from SariLane
Review:
Just read this. Really like it. Can't wait for an update.
Comments from author:
Thanks!

Glad you like it :)
Review By [SariLane] • Date [2 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Six" from RivanWarrioress
Review:
i can't wait for the next part, great work. i kind of wish that Willow and Xander get to stay with Jack and the rest of SG1. Looking forward to reading the next update.

R.W
Comments from author:
Thanks!

Difficult- eitherway someone's gonna to miss Willow and Xander.
Review By [RivanWarrioress] • Date [24 Feb 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Six" from (Current Donor)jcon
Review:
Great chapter. Can't wait for further updates.
Comments from author:
thanks!
Review By [(Current Donor)jcon] • Date [24 Feb 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Six" from Kalliza
Review:
Woo update! More.please!
Comments from author:
Hopefully the next chapter should be the last one, I'll probably post that soonish

Thanks :)
Review By [Kalliza] • Date [24 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Six" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Go, Dawn! No more kid gloves for those who hurt her loved ones.

Meanwhile, O'Neill baiting the Goa'uld is ALWAYS fun.
Comments from author:
Yup, Dawn's very pissed off at the moment

Watched SG1 ep 'Fair Game' yesterday, I loved O'Neill's digs :D
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [23 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Six" from Erica
Review:
Wonderful. I have a question though, it may be a stupid one though. Now that they have their powers back, will willow be able to control her powers now that she remembers having them and what not?
Comments from author:
yes, her magic is getting easier for her to control the more she remembers; though maybe not completely, she is still six.

Glad you like the chapter :)
Review By [Erica] • Date [23 Feb 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Five" from leelaa
Review:
Waiting patiently for whensoever real life and your muses cooperate. Anything at all to take the story forward would be lovely. But any chance of an update in this coming month, please? Or maybe the month after that? Anyway, thanks for a great read. :)
Comments from author:
Almost finished the next chapter; the fic should be updated this week

Glad you're liking the fic :)
Review By [leelaa] • Date [31 Jan 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Five" from ora
Review:
Any chance you're going to update soon. Miss ya bunches ;)
Comments from author:
Actually I've almost finished the next chapter; should be up next week :)
Review By [ora] • Date [16 Dec 11] • Not Rated
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