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Review of chapter "The God of Chaos" from Dragan
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This one SOO needs a part 2 :)
Review By [Dragan] • Date [9 Aug 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The God of Chaos" from sandman
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so funny. can't stop laughing. just awesome
Review By [sandman] • Date [18 Jul 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The God of Chaos" from Stationary
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one of my favorite stories ever!
Review By [Stationary] • Date [26 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The God of Chaos" from djhardim
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While rereading this, it occurred to me that this will probably have an impact on Jack O'Neill's future activities.

Now that he has 3-4 year old child to care for, I think he might be more amenable to a desk job and promotion.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [30 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The God of Chaos" from drae
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We need more of this story please
Review By [drae] • Date [21 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The God of Chaos" from MadHobbit
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very good story,might be fun to have him run into this world's Buffy,Willow or Faith.or Anyna.No demon stuff ,just what the chars would be without it
Review By [MadHobbit] • Date [7 Jul 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The God of Chaos" from (Current Donor)Tanaxanth
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"I believe O'Neill once claimed it would be safer to attempt to defeat Anubis’ army with a knife than to watch your offspring, MajorFerretti," Teal'c commented.

I laughed so hard at that comment and thought about my own kids.
Review By [(Current Donor)Tanaxanth] • Date [22 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The God of Chaos" from (Recent Donor)draconin
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Fascinating idea and very humorous. I can definitely see Jack as an avatar of chaos! If you ever do get around to that sequel, I'd love to see it. :-)
Review By [(Recent Donor)draconin] • Date [5 Jun 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The God of Chaos" from WolfWriter
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Maybe you could do a series of one-shots where Xander is given to new fathers in different realities.

Like maybe Firmus Piett or Maximilian Veers in the Star Wars universe. Okay...maybe not Veers, he wasn't a very affectionate father from what I've read.

Or the Riddler from the 1966 Batman TV series. I've always wanted to see a crossover between Buffy and that particular show.

Or Loki from the Marvel Universe. Since he and Janus are cousins of a sort anyway it'd be more along the line of a family favor. Loki would be too busy looking after Xander to make any mischief of his own, and his wife Sigyn would gladly help him out.

Or take him to the DC comic verse and take your pick. Personally, I think that Wonder Woman would be a good choice. She loves children and is very nurturing. She'd also teach him to kick butt more effectively as he got older.

Maybe her version of the Roman gods could give him a few gifts, along with some from Janus.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the idea but I mostly stick to Xander/Stargate crossovers
Review By [WolfWriter] • Date [12 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The God of Chaos" from falsegod
Review:
GREAT I loved it , would love to see a follow up story
Review By [falsegod] • Date [16 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The God of Chaos" from (Current Donor)vladt
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wonderful read, thank you.
Review By [(Current Donor)vladt] • Date [3 Nov 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The God of Chaos" from mendal
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If the PTB were removed from power and punished then why would xander have to be exiled?


EDIT: Ah
Comments from author:
Becasue Janus made a deal with the other Gods to save Xander becasue he could not reverse what the Power That Be did. It would be very bad for Janus and Xander if Janus broke his deal with other Gods
Review By [mendal] • Date [31 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The God of Chaos" from (Recent Donor)jcon
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Oh you have to do the whole childhood/growing up thingy!!! You must, you must.
Thankyou for an enjoyable read. This was a pleasant beginning (hint hint) to a great epic tale.
My regards to you
Comments from author:
I've started one and I got stuck. Maybe when work settles down a little I'll return to it
Review By [(Recent Donor)jcon] • Date [24 Jun 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The God of Chaos" from WanderingSoul
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---Consider a sequel to this too!

Happy writing!
Review By [WanderingSoul] • Date [17 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The God of Chaos" from BerserkerNW
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If you ever decide to continue this, that would be awesome! Very fun story, and I like that Janus was so protective of Xander. And there's really no better choice to raise him than Jack. Thanks for sharing!
Review By [BerserkerNW] • Date [14 Dec 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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