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Where is the Justice? Where is the Punishment?

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Review of chapter "The Morning After Punishment" from IcemanII
Review:
I have just reread this story and I hope you get inspired to add more to it.
Review By [IcemanII] • Date [10 Oct 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Morning After Punishment" from lorwen
Review:
good, solid, story.
I'm curious to see where it's going.
Review By [lorwen] • Date [19 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Morning After Punishment" from Bobboky
Review:
nice
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [14 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Morning After Punishment" from Rorschach
Review:
sweet
Review By [Rorschach] • Date [13 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Morning After Punishment" from TheLaughingMan
Review:
All you need to do is calm yourself down a bit when your writing, you make little mistakes and don't finish thoughts. Don't worry, it happens to me all the time. Other than that, it's a great story. The edge of Frank is great, the denial mixed with shock is also very good, but the 1911 Colts is what did it for me. That little detail was a very nice touch. The length is nice, as is the dialog. All in all, a great story with loads of potential, keep it up and I might just kiss you. Tongue or no tongue, your choice.

Addition: Just a joke...I'll get you a hot chick.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'll try to work on those mistakes. And who doesn't love the 1911 Colts, they're just sexy.

Plus I'm a dude and I don't swing that way so unless you're an incredibly beautiful woman, I settle with a handshake.
Review By [TheLaughingMan] • Date [12 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Morning After Punishment" from JediKnight
Review:
Nice beginning, please add more soon. When might you add in "Charmed" and "DeathNote"?
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'll be working hard on this story.

I'll be dropping off clues here and there about Death Note and Charmed. But they won't be completely involved until Xander completely changes into The Punisher.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [12 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from Robby
Review:
Can't wait for more!!!
Review By [Robby] • Date [3 Aug 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from Bill
Review:
Dark but good!
Review By [Bill] • Date [30 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from Bobboky
Review:
interesting
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [30 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from TheLaughingMan
Review:
First off: Thank you for answering my challenge. You did very well for the first chapter, I suggest getting a beta if you don't have one..it's always good to have a second opinion. But I like this and look forward to more.
Review By [TheLaughingMan] • Date [29 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from LordCorwin
Review:
NIT NIT NIT -- Response to TheLaughingMan challenge/ Xander gose as The Punisher for Halloween and is given the nightmares by the God of Punishment.

Needs changing .. you've given away too much about the story with the brief ... *chuckle* ..
I'm trying to come up with something better ... give me a few minutes ... hmm .. :)

Well, for the life of me, I can't come up with anything better ...

The story itself ... is "ok" .... but you've left out a LOT of background story .... leading upto what just happened.
it would be great, if you had that in the "whole" story....
Comments from author:
This is just the prologue, a glimpse of the future of what would and become when he finally gives in to the nightmares.
Review By [LordCorwin] • Date [29 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from Mcspender
Review:
There's no Revenge. There's no Hate... only Justice, only Punishment.
Dark, pretty dark, considering that Castle is one of the darkest characters in the Marvel roster; by the way, the God of Punishment is your creation?.

See ya!!.
Comments from author:
Actually the one who will give Xander his nightmares introduces himself as as god of punishment. But I clarify later who it actually is. And no it's not a demon or working for the PTB, let's just say he has a thing for scythes.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [29 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from eriktheviking
Review:
Nicely written, what there is of it.

It's a good epilogue, but needs the fore-story.

Enjoyable all the same.

Thanks

Lee
Comments from author:
This is just the prologue, a glimpse of the future of what would and become when he finally gives in to the nightmares.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [29 Jun 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]
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