Well on the upside Jack didn't really screw Illiyra on the downside i really wanted to leave a review telling you that you were going to a Special Hell for writing it dangit, well i guess it will have to wait for another time darn. This fic was amusing and totally in character for some reason you can't help but love Illiyra.
Review By [DamianAzrael] • Date [31 Mar 11] • Not Rated
That needs just a little bit more of a scene. Like the people watching the cameras noteing just how far her kick into Jack's behind sent him into the ocean or something.
Review By [Thedruid] • Date [6 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Your Illyria characterization seems spot on, and I really enjoyed the idea of her only allowing herself the pleasure of killing Jack after being assured that it wouldn't be permanent, and therefore wouldn't upset Wesley, wherever he was.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [3 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Loved this. Too bad Jack didn't get an attempt to 'copulate' with Illyria. I think his skill set on such matters might dazzle even Illyria. lol! Though I did love the ending. Yeah, mean of me, I know.
(^_^)/ BEM
Review By [Bugeyedmonster] • Date [21 Mar 09] • Not Rated
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