The Doctor was so in character! I loved this-very well done! I wants more, please.
Comments from author:
Sorry, that's all for that story...really glad you liked it though! THanks for the review! Love xx Shezzi (you may enjoy Rose Tyler...Vampire Slayer, or Key...they're two of my other stories in this category. There's also Not Here..but you can't read that unless you're able to read the FR 21 stuff - and it's very very different from anything i have posted before.) thanks for the review! love xx Shezzi
Review By [BlameyFomorrii] • Date [30 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Very good - very enjoyable. I think you got everyone very much in character. I liked Buffy's line - explaining to the new vamp - "You vampire, me Slayer, this stake, you...dust."
Comments from author:
Thanks. I have to admit that I wrote this fic around several lines. that one and the one the doctor says about buffy are two of them. thanks for the review! love xx Shezzi
“Oh, you are magnificent,” said the Doctor, stepping forward and peering at the girl. “Totally wrong, and completely illegal, but still, you're fantastic...and I really have to remember not to use that word, it just doesn't sound right with these teeth.”
That is probably the best Doctor line I have ever seen in a fanfic. Ever.
The rest of the dialogue and the plot was good, but that line, for me, just made the whole fic. The only thing that wasn't quite right was the fact that Buffy didn't question the Doctor more about his intentions towards Rose, seeing that he wasn't human and any non-humans she's met have been demons intent on very bad things. But, really, it was only slightly off and if you were trying for a 'ships passing in the night' kind of thing you couldn't have her trying to stake him because that would become way too plot/dialogue/action involved.
Good job.
Comments from author:
funny you should say that: I wrote the entire fic for that one line: i was watching Tooth and Claw again and the idea came to me. glad you liked it! as far as Buffy not questioning the Doctor more, I've always figured she could kind of sense intentions as well; after all, she never killed clem, and I'm kinda sure there are a few other examples. and, like i said, her house has entirely too many windows for her to start casting stones. thanks for the review! love xx Shezzi
I really liked this. Your characterizations were spot on. Maybe when your muse nudges you again, You'll grace us with a longer Whoverse fic? Preferably Buffy centric once again as she's my favorite Scoob.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I'd like to, but for now I have to limit myself to little one shots because i have WAY too many WIP's going. thanks for the review! love xx SHezzi
Review By [MrGordo] • Date [30 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]