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The Bat/Slayer 2099

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Review of chapter "Chapter Three: Legacy’s & Gifts" from djhardim
Review:
Great story. I was reading this and have a question - Was Matt McGinness(Terry's brother) involved in crime fighting? According to the series' creators, Bruce Wayne was also the genetic father of Warren.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Batman_Beyond
Review By [djhardim] • Date [27 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three: Legacy’s & Gifts" from soulfulone
Review:
ok...im psyched for this story as i am a huge fan of both Batman and Buffy....i really like how you have intergrated to two story lines and blended them so well....you've hooked me and now i am anxiously awaiting more!!! brilliant story so far...love the detail.....but but as much as im diggin this story i do have a gripe: you might wanna check your timeline and age of characters, i.e. Willow could not be 102, if she graduated from highschool (canonwise) in 1999 at 18..and this is 100 yrs later, she'd be 118 in 2099, and would have been 108 in 2089 when Tara was called know what I mean? and Cristina Summers, if she was Dawn's daughter, then Buffy would have been her aunt, not great aunt, unless Dawn (Buffy's sister) had a daughter she also named Dawn (which you didn't specify)...and the one thing that i found hilariously OCC was Faith (of all people) being in love with Xander!!! that was actually very funny...but the other details....if you're gonna go to the trouble to mention them and make them part of the story, then my 2 cents worth is that it should be accurate.....please don't take this as a flame.....cause i really like your story and appreciate you putting it out there for fans to share!!!
Comments from author:
thanks for the review and for using the subdule 2x4 up side my head I'll go back and correct the errors
Review By [soulfulone] • Date [3 Aug 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three: Legacy’s & Gifts" from daveykins
Review:
Good story so far - looking forward to more
Comments from author:
thank you going to try and do some more writing as soon as my daughter go's home
*hugs&kisses*
Review By [daveykins] • Date [1 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three: Legacy’s & Gifts" from Coralskipper
Review:
Wonderful story. I love how well you've integrated the Batman animated Universe, and the Buffyverse. I'm curious to see how this turns out.
Comments from author:
thx
Review By [Coralskipper] • Date [1 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three: Legacy’s & Gifts" from Coralskipper
Review:
Wonderful story. I love how well you've integrated the Batman animated Universe, and the Buffyverse. I'm curious to see how this turns out.
Comments from author:
well can't say now but I'm working on the next chapter now hope to send it to beta some time next week. I must say that positive feed back make a happy writer.
*hugs&kisses*
Review By [Coralskipper] • Date [1 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ten years earlier" from Wolveschildscub
Review:
very good but you need to streangthen the charecters themselves before working on the plot anymore. overall a good story to start off your writings with
Comments from author:
ok thx for the review next chapter is at the beta now going to go into depth on several of the main characters
Review By [Wolveschildscub] • Date [20 Jul 08] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One First Appearance of The Bat" from Kate
Review:
It looks okay, a bit rough but good.
Although I don't think any family as Secretive and Control obsessed as Wayne/McGuiness would trust anyone, Council or otherwise to train a kid. and Samuel likely had custody as Alfred was left custody so they couldn't have fought for her.
Comments from author:
well in later chapters you'll see that they did try and fail to get Tara because Sam is very good as far as letting someone else train her both her mom and dad were dead and it really wasn't a very well known secret because after Terry there wasn't another Bat for almost fifty years until Tara herself.thanks so much for the feed back and I make sure to explain further in future chapters


*hugs&kisses*
Review By [Kate] • Date [16 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One First Appearance of The Bat" from Vornae
Review:
Very nice start and since the grammar and spelling have already been addressed then I will not go into it further. I love the idea of combining a Bat and a Slayer and hope to read more in the near future.
Comments from author:
yes well I didn't mean to post the story yet (still had it at the Beta) but hopefully I'll get it back and be able to put more on (1st ch. not even finished yet)
Review By [Vornae] • Date [1 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One First Appearance of The Bat" from rothos
Review:
Very good story, but it could be improved on by grammar and spelling editing. A helpful hint is to write your stories in something with a spellchecker. Some also do a grammar check. Great story, please expand on the Watcher/Slayer angle in further chapters, seems to me that the White Knight's descendant will be influential in this. I can almost feel a new Bat clan taking shape.
Comments from author:
thanks this is my first story on TtH and I used the spell checker from the writers resources section and didn't mean to post it till it had been Beta'd I'll try to do better
Review By [rothos] • Date [30 Jun 08] • Not Rated
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