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Review of chapter "Devil's Night" from JediKnight
Review:
Very good job on the new chapter, I hope to read more soon.

Any clue what you'll update next?

Any progress on "No Fate"?
Comments from author:
Thanks and no idea.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [31 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Devil's Night" from Vilkath
Review:
Strange chapter, convenient the cop just happens be in same city and yet Xander couldn't find any indication of him. convenient that he just said Devils night would prove Xander was in charge.. then Xander went and did it.

Especially convenient turn of events 'for the hero's' when before his death Xander's dad was going on about how Devi's night had lost it's touch and wasn't important any more. In fact since the whole 'vampire thing' came about 'Saint' has lost anything remotely like a brain and has done everything he used to say he wouldn't do. He wanted to become his own man, not a copy his father. He was super cautious and always thought ahead, kept a tight control on his emotions etc.

Now he's a brain dead idiot running around about how powerful he is, ignoring vampires die all the time and even the 'father' of his breed of vampires was killed as well. I know it was said before this was a 'set up' to kick Xander down but honestly the whole build up seems so fake to begin with. I wonder if it's part of the vampire power package to be dumb as stone and twice as arrogant? I mean every fledgling thinks they are a god just because their stronger then a human. Ignoring the fact hundreds of demons and other beast are still stronger then the most ancient vampire. Did not the master drop to Buffy in season one, very first 'boss' monster went down easier then Angelus or Spike did and he was supposed to be the oldest living vampire.
Comments from author:
Yeah, I'm doing that on purpose. I want Saint to become like this so that he can have a wake up call later. Trust me, there is a method to this.
Review By [Vilkath] • Date [30 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mercury, Quinn, And A Meeting" from Vilkath
Review:
Very interesting idea though I do think most recent chapters seem to be falling off the wagon so to speak of the original plot. Xander seems to be forgetting almost everything he was taught by his father since becoming 'deacon Frost'. He lets his emotions run wild, especially during vampiric feeding and such, anger and what not quick to act.

Relying way to much on the vampiric strength instead of strength of mind and such he appreciated before. Over all he's turning into every two bit big bad with delusions of grander we usually see. SO high up on how much stronger he's then humans he forgets how still tons of people stronger then him.

Plus it just seems like he's following Blade back story a little to closely with becoming a Deacon clone.
Comments from author:
He's become very arrogant, but that's because he needs to be humbled and the Hellmouth will do that for him.
Review By [Vilkath] • Date [13 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mercury, Quinn, And A Meeting" from JediKnight
Review:
Very good job on the update, I hope to read more soon.
Will Saint ever be back in Sunnydale?
What about using "Hellsing" for this or "No Fate"?
Are you familiar with the series "Bleach"?
Comments from author:
Oh, yeah. Probably in the next two chapters. Right now I'm just filling in the gaps in between.

It's possible.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [9 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Mercury, Quinn, And A Meeting" from angelus
Review:
Yay you updated *hands you a cookie*
Comments from author:
*Bites into cookie* Mhpf. Ish goodsh.
Review By [angelus] • Date [4 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Deidre, Clubs, And Blood" from JediKnight
Review:
Interesting chapter you posted, I hope that you'll add more soon.
What might be the next crossover you'll add?
What about "Charmed", "Spider-Man", and/or "Blade"?
Are you familiar with the anime "Hellsing"?
Are you familiar with the series "Trinity Blood"?
When might you update "No Fate"?
See any good movies lately? Why not use "Naruto" or "Inuyasha" for "No Fate"?
How would it mess things up?
What about using "Hellsing" for "No Fate"?
Comments from author:
Maybe X-men, maybe not. Do you have any suggestions or ideas?

Perhaps Charmed but I don't know enough about the show. Blade is all ready in the story ala Mercury and Deacon Frost.

Yes I am, maybe that would work.

I am not familiar with Trinity but Hellsing I am.

Whenever I can. I got a life too man. Not much of one, but still.....XD

God no! I will not do those fandoms for this story. It would mess everything up. Except for the girls, I really don't any reason for it.

Becuase too many overpowered characters would take away from the power of the terminators. Which will be very important. Xander while a good fighter is dangerous mostly because of his leadership, strategic mind, and charisma. It is the Terminators that are the real hard hitters. Stronger than a Slayer and there are more than one or two at a time.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [3 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Mercury, Quinn, And A Meeting" from sunamee
Review:
Was the blonde girl with Billy Buff? Anyway, glad to see another update.
Review By [sunamee] • Date [3 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Mercury, Quinn, And A Meeting" from TheDon
Review:
was that buffy and did he sense her being a potential slayer?
Comments from author:
Yep.
Review By [TheDon] • Date [3 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Deidre, Clubs, And Blood" from angelus
Review:
welcome back always enjoy your stories :)
Comments from author:
Thanks 'gelus.
Review By [angelus] • Date [13 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Deidre, Clubs, And Blood" from spanderfan
Review:
Oh! Poor Willow. Maybe he'll sense her power and take her away. And OMFG is Buffy there yet? Can you imagine Xander and Buffy will they fight will she take to Xander as well as she did to Angel? So many questions! Can't wait for more!
Comments from author:
We shall see. Oh and Spike will love Xander's parties. I can see an odd friendship being struck up.
Review By [spanderfan] • Date [12 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mercury, Make-overs, And A Plan" from angelus
Review:
ooh dark Xander I love it :feeds the plot bunny:
Comments from author:
Thanks. I wish it was as popular as Slade or Clown Prince. :(
Review By [angelus] • Date [9 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Mercury, Make-overs, And A Plan" from JediKnight
Review:
Nice job on the chapter, please add more.
Any idea what the next crossover will be?
Comments from author:
Not yet. Got any ideas?
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [9 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Mercury, Make-overs, And A Plan" from angelkitty
Review:
Damn send shivers up and down my spine.... this is so freaking awesome. i love it to death..... cant wait to readmore
Comments from author:
Don't worry, I'm focusing on this story for the moment.
Review By [angelkitty] • Date [8 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fall Of The Father, Rise Of The Son Part 2" from angelus
Review:
great story so far you made me want to watch The Crow again not like I needed an excuse to mind you lol
Comments from author:
It is addictive isn't it?
Review By [angelus] • Date [6 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fall Of The Father, Rise Of The Son Part 2" from Altarus
Review:
Finally, i´ve been on the lookout for another evil Xander fic since the DarkXZ group on yahoo vanished and to find a story with an Human!Evil Xander is great. Continue with this and you´ll have another avid reader.

Altarus
Comments from author:
If you like this then check out my other stories.
Review By [Altarus] • Date [5 Sep 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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